Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Whispers in the Air: Part I

Monday, December 29, 2003

After leaving New Melbourne minus one member, A stow away is found, and Book is confronted by his past.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2419    RATING: 8.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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"Sot this is goodbye?" Mal solembly asked himself as he watched his crew say their goodbyes to Inara. He knows that Serenity will never be the same after today. Kaylee will lose an older sister type rolemodel. Jayne will still have his daydreams of Inara and the female Diplomat. Book, even though being a Shepherd holds Compainions in low regard, he knows he will be missing her friendship and understanding.

Inara, in an oriental red dress, with her hair tied up into a bun eith a black stick holding it in place. Inara walks over to Mal. "Well, this is goodbye." she quietly states.

"I'm guessin' so." Mal said with his arms folded.

"Hmm." Inara smiled.

"What?!"

"It's nothing. I thoght this is how'd you react."

"So your not sad by this?" Mal asks looking straight into her eyes.

"No, Mal." she says staring back into his eyes. "You're forgettin' I can read bodies, Mal." Inara leans close to Mal and kisses him on his cheek. "Goodbye." she whispers into his ear, just before she turns her back on him.

"Wash! Prep for takeoff.!" Mal orders.

"Sure thing." Said Wash. "Bye, Inara."

"Sadness." River said, getting Simon's attention.

With the engines reving up, the crew of Serenity gets ack on board the ship. Zoe makes her way up to the bridge, to her husband. While everyone else gathers in the Cargo hold. With Serentiy slowly rising up into the sky, Mal stands on the loading deck, bidding his goodbye to Inara, by watching heras the ship leaves. With the door closing Mal walks in, not taking his eyes off of Inara.

"Where to Cap'n?" Kaylee asks wile whipping tears off of her face.

Mal just passes them, and walks through the sitting room, up the stairs, through the kitchen, then into the corridor with the crew quarters. He pushes the door to his room in, and climbs down the ladder.

"When you can't run, you crawl. When you can't crawl; when you can't do that, you find someone to carry you." A man cowers on Mal's bed.

"Who the ( [Chinese] Son of a space cow) are you?" Mal asks loudly, getting the n

Comments
Tuesday, 30 December 2003 00:33
Well, that was a cool start. LOL! at the commercial line. That's just mean. :)

Tuesday, 30 December 2003 04:38
Very Interesting.
Tuesday, 30 December 2003 21:09
Good start. Raised a lot of questions I want answered. Write some more!
Thursday, 01 January 2004 05:53
Shiny start! I would like answers, but they will only lead to more questions. I also like the commercial line.
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Monday, 01 May 2006 11:03
Okay, that was... unexpected. Putting together Inara's leaving and this presumed flashback together with the appearance of the stranger in Mal's bunk is a little disconcerting. Enemy, friend or simply the mad of madness? Be interesting to see how this develops. Ali D :~)
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