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The Strawman

Saturday, October 22, 2005

Written for Halloween Challenge Rayne Shippers. Warning for Deathfic. River follows the strawman.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3146    RATING: 6.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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AUTHOR's NOTES: This is my first posted complete Firefly fanfic. I used to write fanfic for The Sentinel. I am working on a longer fic at the moment that I will post when it is completed. And if you can't tell I am Jaynebabe and a Rayne shipper. Enjoy! Would really appreciate feedback on this fic.

The Strawman

Stormwolf

The flames danced.

All eyes watched the people who paid homage to the flames, moving in rhythmic grace, encircling the bonfire that lit the village of Salem.

River moved among the dancers and the revelers chasing the sparks that floated upon the wind. She found Simon first, sitting on a bale of hay beside the sweet mechanic, drinking the home brewed beer, and cuddling against Kaylee. Kaylee seemed to welcome the cuddle, seeking her own comfort in Simon’s arms.

River passed them by, intent on following the strawman. He danced on spindly legs, while sparks from the fire that burned him blew in the air like fireflies. He had been placed on the bonfire earlier, to burn away the year and to burn away the sins. River didn’t think it had worked.

But she followed him anyway as he beckoned her with burning hands. He led her to Malcolm Reynolds, who sat upon the tail of the wagon that had brought the straw and the wood for the bonfire. He, too drank, the homebrewed beer. Drowning in the fermented grain,. He looked up at her approach. She knew he could not see the burning strawman, only the young girl who was not a girl standing before him in her red dress and combat boots, hair blowing in the night breeze.

“What are you doing?” Mal asked her. “Where’s your brother?”

“Simon is basking in the sun, swallowing the grain and feeding the warmth.” River said. Beside her the strawman laughed, flames burning brighter.

“Uh huh.” Mal said. “He’s with Kaylee I suppose. And what are you doing?”

“Going to find the Green knight, I need a holly bush. The man of straw and hay leads the way.”

“Green knight huh. Not any of those around here.” He took another

Comments
Sunday, 23 October 2005 03:03
It took me a while to comprehend the subtext. I hate to say it, but my first reaction was" what in hell?"
Sunday, 23 October 2005 14:00
i think someone's been watchin' "the corpse bride"...sweet in it's own morbid way

b
Sunday, 23 October 2005 15:37
Actually I have never seen the Corpse Bride. THe only movie I have been to in the past three months is Serenity.

Glad you liked it though.
Thursday, 27 October 2005 20:45
hmmm I never really thought of Jayne as green..... I did really enjoy the story and I did understand it, but it did leave me feeling kinda sad.
Monday, 31 October 2005 04:52
See, I told ya I'd read both of your stories, Storm! I like this, especially the line: "He had been placed on the bonfire earlier, to burn away the year and to burn away the sins. River didn’t think it had worked." I liked River on a river, etc. and I liked the whole River voice in this piece. She thought and talked like I need her to. I think I must be too dense to get most of the imagery. Maybe you could explain it to me some time. I know about the strawman's symbolic burning for sins, harvest, etc., but maybe there's more you could tell me. Gotta tell you, even though you let the gorram reavers more than half-kill Jayne in "Patients" that one is still my fave. Now be a good Storm and prove you're Jayne's girl by getting our lovely strong merc back on his feet, 'kay?
Friday, 24 February 2006 03:41
.......................................................................................................................................huh?


Interestingish. Kinda sad

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