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The Snake in the Apple Tree 2

Sunday, October 16, 2005

Part of the sequel to the Apples series, the missing piece of the morning after and what Kaylee saw, Simon’s POV

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The Snake in the Apple Tree 2

by belasera

A vague disclaimer is nobody's friend: All recognizable characters, etc. belong not to me, but to Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy, and Fox, and no money is being made here. The story, however, is mine.

Part of the sequel to the Apples series, the missing piece of the morning after and what Kaylee saw, Simon’s POV

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Simon saw. He didn’t like what he saw, but he saw it alright.

Kaylee, the sweetest friend he’d never deserved, Kaylee. Coming out of Jayne’s bunk, looking for all the world like Jayne’d had his hands all over her. He couldn’t help but thank Buddha for the blessing of his timing. If he’d been a moment earlier, if he’d opened the hatch to that bunk to find the two of them….wuo de ma, he could only handle so much of this..this thing.

They were laughing at him. He couldn’t help but think it, laughing at the gullible core worlder not comprehending the games they played out here in the long stretch of black. Except she wouldn’t, Kaylee wouldn’t set him up as a mark, wouldn’t giggle as Jayne whispered in her ear, told her what he’d done. Simons face was tight and hot, seemed no end to the ways this ship could humiliate him, it was a feeling he was becoming accustomed to, and wrong footed seemed to be his way of walking these days.

………………………………………………………………………………………

It was two weeks ago that he’d woken up to a new dimension of discomfort. After he’d, after they’d…he could hardly think of it without feeling the need to hide in his bunk, fold to the desperate mix of shame and arousal that left him painfully hard. It was almost too intense to remember what they’d done, and almost too embarrassing to remember the morning after.

He’d woken sore and fuzzy headed, his muscles taut with a tense recollection even as his eyes cleared, focused on Jayne crouching over him fully dressed, his t-shirt tucked so neatly that for a moment Simon thought he’d suffered a head injury, passed out in the dining room and dreamt the rest. But Jayne wasn’t looking him in the eye

Comments
KNITTINGJEDI
Monday, 17 October 2005 00:31
oh, the drama. soooo good and I demand more! :)
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 17 October 2005 00:34
Okay, and now for when Simon confronts Kaylee....
Monday, 17 October 2005 01:37
Okay, I'm sucked in now.

Damn you. I don't like Man-on-man. Oh well, I'll comfort myself with the Jaylee kiss as I read the rest.
Monday, 17 October 2005 03:31
Aww, why!??! The angst. I thought you loved us! ;) Why can't the boys just kiss and make up? Again, your tone and the voices of the characters are pitch-perfect. I adore your Jayne, and even your Kaylee. More please! Pretty please?
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 17 October 2005 05:36
God, I love this series. Can't wait for the next part.
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 17:16
eeep!!! poor simon, always gettin' the wrong end of the stick...so to speak

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Saturday, 26 November 2005 10:07
Ahhhhhh. This thing is grand. Fave line: "it was like Jayne had tossed him down a well, and then jumped in after him. Only way to get out was together, but Simon didn’t know if Jayne was willing to offer him a hand…again." You've got the way of it, for sure. Some of this fic's like poetry, it flows so well.

Gotta tell ya: When Simon first put his leg up against Jayne at dinner. And Jayne stopped mid-word. And then Jayne did NOT move his leg, I was floored! More, more, more. How do we like it, how do we like it? More more MORE!

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