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Pins & Needles 2, The Last Stitch

Tuesday, October 11, 2005

She likes it when he's nervous

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2951    RATING: 8.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Pins and Needles 2

by belasera

A vague disclaimer is nobody’s friend: All recognizable characters, etc. belong not to me, but to Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy, and Fox, and no money is being made here. The story, however, is mine.

Just finishing up what I started with the first. Still very much pre-BDM

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Simons quick fingers worked at the stitches, he didn’t hardly even feel them sliding back out of his body. Wasn’t nothin’ but a routine, ‘specially for Jayne. He had a habit of getting’ tore up, and Simon had a habit of sewin’ him back together without comment. The doc’d taken pretty well to this life, Jayne couldn’t help but admit with a grudge. Grudge wasn’t nothin’ new, for all his clever stitches this doc and his sister had caused a stir in what had been a near comfortable life. Decent boat, enough food even for him, a tussle wherever he and Mal went, hell there was a paid companion on the same ship he lived on. If that wasn’t gorram lucky, he didn’t know luck from mud. Didn’t matter that he couldn’t touch her, he hadn’t wanted to so much after he saw some o’ the other pretty this ship held.

Think of the devil.

Kaylee walked past the infirmary, or nearly past anyway. Her eyes must have caught Jayne, she backed up to the door and peered her bright face in.

“You gettin’ ‘em out?”

Her question could have been casual, but Jayne heard the same dark curiosity in her voice that had been there a few nights back, when she poked at him softly and talked ‘bout reavers. Reaver sewing habits, actually. Damn creepifying, if you asked him.

Jayne gave her a scowl, near as he could manage for her anyway.

“Ah, girl, just keep walkin’.”

She did with a snort, and what the thought was a wink. Definitely a wink.

“Aw, doc, that girl is a barrel full. Can’t even figure if I envy you or not.”

It seemed to take a moment for Simon to register that Jayne was speaking to him, maybe it was his near friendly voice that surprised the doctor, caused him to stutter.

“I, oh, I…there’s not

Comments
Tuesday, 11 October 2005 04:46
Ohhhhhhhh, yeaaaaaaaah. That piece slipped trippingly afront of my eyes like Kaylee's and Jayne's hands on each other. The long lead-up was just the appetizer for the main course of the result of the failed ball game. The frontis piece played Jayne & Kaylee awkward, gawky as colts yet needy and hurting. But when they finally came together due to Jayne seeing the shine in Kaylee's eyes it was all grown up and streamlined as all get out. I loved it, pure and simple and can't stop thinking about how long and lovingly you could make it last when they get more close and private and possibly horizontal (or up against a bulkhead or in the shower or in the infirmary, etc.) Got more? Please tell us you've got more. The 'Verse can't be so cruel as to rule against a LOT more of this.
-Roving Eye
Tuesday, 11 October 2005 10:38
As good as this was I still wish it had been Simon and Kaylee. Sigh. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 11 October 2005 14:15
Oh man. SO perfect.

So sad and sweet at the same time.

“I don’t wanna play at this. At you bein’ something you ain’t, talkin’ about things you don’t even think of.”

I LOVED that line. So Jayne and so sad!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 11 October 2005 14:58
*happy tushy dance* Good job, yet again with the Jayne & Kaylee fic!
Wednesday, 12 October 2005 10:23
YAY!!! *joins anonymous in happy tushy dance*

zhufu ni

b
Wednesday, 12 October 2005 12:17
Really liked this one, please write some more
SKYE2477
Wednesday, 12 October 2005 19:20
I'm such a sucker of jaylee stuff! this was great, but i'd love to see more!!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 October 2005 07:57
see me happy so happy
Thursday, 27 October 2005 02:46
Tasty. That's the word.
Yah.
I think though, probably best if it's NOT on against the cargo bay wall. Hate to 'splain that to Mal when he comes down to check on the cargo.

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