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Sunday, October 9, 2005

Jayne, Jayne, glorious Jayne... contains nudity :)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2164    RATING: 7.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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There was some kinda flowery smell in the air, Jayne could smell it even though he couldn’t say where he was. Lyin’ on a bed, that was for sure. He tried to roll over and get up but was restrained by soft blankets tangled up in his legs. He grunted with effort and couldn’t figure out why he couldn’t reach the stupid… gorram… blankets……. He fell back against the bed with another grunt, his head spinning, his hands shaking… ‘Musta been a good night’ he muttered into the twilight darkness of the room – damn fine moonshine they had on this rock… wherever it was. He heard movement on the other side of the room and struggled to find his weapon. But he was naked under the blankets and before he could feel under the pillow the soft flowery smell was next to him, all…

wrapped up in….

some…kinda… rustling…. Dress….

As the darkness flowed up over him and sunk into his mind he heard a voice..

‘hush now mr, you’re fine, you’re safe. Just sleep now… you’re safe’

‘aint never s……’ he slurred as unconsciousness claimed him.

The voice was the next thing he heard… he couldn’t understand what it was saying at first, it was just like cottonwool in his brain…soft, warm…reminded him of.. Reminded him of… ah hell he aint never heard a voice like that before…but then he was dreaming so that was ok. The voice started to make a bit more sense, and at the same time he could feel someone touching him. Like walking into a cold rain he realised he wasn’t dreaming, was being bathed like a baby! The hands wiping him with a cloth and then drying him.

‘aint no gorram baby..’ he growled and tried to push the hands away

‘I know’ said the voice, sounding like it was laughing at him ‘aint funny’ he grumbled and grabbed one of the hands. It twisted easily out of he grasp and he knew something was really wrong if his massive hands couldn’t hold someone still. ‘wha’s wrong with me?’ he grunted. The voice leaned in closer to him ‘you were in an accident about three weeks ago – do you remember? You’re on Green..’ Jayne look

Comments
Sunday, 09 October 2005 11:24
So did Jayne leave Serenity and if so why? And where the good gorram is everyone else? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 09 October 2005 11:43
Its very Jayne-centric for the first little while, dont worry everyone else will be there! This first bit is prior to 'Serenity', then it will continue on afterwards...
Sunday, 09 October 2005 11:45
Its very Jayne-centric for the first little while, dont worry everyone else will be there! This first bit is prior to 'Serenity', then it will continue on afterwards...
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 09 October 2005 12:41
not sure if its from a real book or not but its not bad
Sunday, 09 October 2005 21:43
All-Jayne-all-the-time would be just peachy for me, actually. The more the better. I like Verity all ready, agreeing with Jayne that the name's pretty, sorta like Vera. LOL. You've got him down perfectly with the disjointed brain-damaged rambling as he recovers. The only gorram thing wrong with this piece is that it's too fargin' short. More, more I say! And thanks for just enough to get me grumpy.
-Roving Eye
Wednesday, 12 October 2005 10:28
brain damaged? really? i thought it was just jayne bein' jayne...
Monday, 17 October 2005 06:41
I hear ya, bellona and can't disagree wid it. Heck, nothing Jayne said or did or thought could surprise many of us, I reckon. That's part of what makes him so fun to read about (and write about.)

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