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Can't Stop the Signal (1/?)

Friday, September 30, 2005

Mal and Inara are together, but Inara owes the Guild for all her training.

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Title: Can’t Stop the Signal

Author: Missjasadin

Rating: PG

Characters: All

Summary: Mal and Inara are together, but Inara owes the Guild for all her training.

Website: http://www.livejournal.com/users/jasadin

CHAPTER ONE

“Mal, we’ve had this conversation one hundred times before. I don’t like this anymore than you do, but it’s what I have to do.” Inara sighed looking at the stoic man sitting before her.

“But, I thought, since we, ‘you know’, that you’d… stop, ‘you know’.” He replied looking into her eyes, searching for answers she couldn’t give him.

“Malcolm Reynolds!” Inara stood eyes flashing, a surge of anger rushing through her at his words. “If you make one more comment about my ‘whoring’…” she threatened, glowering at him.

Mal stood at once, shocked by her reaction. He had not meant to insult her, hell he hadn’t even thought about using any sexual innuendos as he usually did to get her riled up. He was just speaking, and he’d gone and gorram screwed up, again.

“Shenme? God, ‘Nara. No, all I meant was that…” he looked down at the ground suddenly feeling self-conscious in her presence. “I don’t want to have to share you with those men. I can’t.” He stated.

Her glare softened and she approached him slowly, talking his strong calloused hands in her small smooth ones.

“I know. But the guild was my home for so many years and I owe them so much. I must pay back my debt before I am free.”

“But we could…” he started hoping to convince her that there were other ways.

“No Mal” She immediately knew what he was suggesting that she do. “No running, not this time. Besides, we don’t need another fugitive on this ship. They would surely hunt me down and the price which I would pay…” She trailed off, her eyes widening in fear.

“Fine. We’ll pay them their dues and then you’ll be free of their hold.”

“Mal,” Inara spoke softly not wanting to upset him more than necessary, “there is no we.” He looked at her in shock. “Sorry, that was wrong. Yes, there is a ‘we’, but not for this. This is so

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 06 October 2005 19:45
Not bad! You have the voices down, and the characters correctly in character.

I would, however, suggest that if you don't already have a beta reader, that you utilize one. Not necessarily for grammar, but for some editing to ease into the dialogue in places.

But in all, as a whole, this was nicely done and I do so love Mal and Inara together. You done right by them and I do hope you'll do more.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 08 October 2005 04:46
Very nice writing! I've been waiting long for somebody to put Mal and Inara firmly together as a couple, but to address the quandary of the future of her work. Wondered how she and he would handle that, and this works shiny. Thanks for the love I could feel between the two too.
-Roving Eye
BELLONA
Thursday, 20 October 2005 17:37
aaaw, lovin' the mal/inara ficcy goodness!!!

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