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Of Softness and Steel - Part 3

Sunday, August 28, 2005

Pirates hijack Serenity, leaving Jayne, Wash, River and Kaylee to fend for themselves.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4115    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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This is also half Wendy again. ;) So thankies to her. Keep in mind, these are more vignettes than an actual successive plot.

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Jayne sat on the landing of the cat walk, his legs hanging over the edge as he sharpened his bowie knife, keeping an eye on the cargo. Not that it was going anywhere, his jaw clenched with resentment. He was stuck on the ship babysitting Kaylee and River while everyone else except Wash was planetside.

He pressed his blade into the grindstone viciously, even the Doctor got to leave the ship, tagging along after Book in search of some illusive medicine he thought he needed to cure the crazy girl. Even Jayne knew you couldn't cure crazy.

He caught movement below, a flash of honey brown hair and coveralls moving between the crates. He stilled the movement of the blade, watching her kneel down beside the charred Mule to gather the tools she'd been using in her attempts to repair the poor beast. Ever the optimist, thinking she could breath life back into it. 'Course, if anyone could, it was Kaylee.

He stifled a smile, watching her struggle with her overfull tool box for a moment. "You hurt yerself, Mal's gonna blow me out the airlock, Kaylee."

Kaylee whipped around and looked up at Jayne. He was looking mean and ornery up there with a huge knife in one hand. "Oh I'm fine! Just this things seems t' get heavier ever damn time. Can't complain though. I 'member when we hardly had a speck a tools. Now I can't carry 'em all." She set the box down and started to unload some of the larger pieces.

He jumped to his feet, sheathing his knife. "Don't be doin' that. I'll help ya."

Kaylee watched his progress as he made his way down the stairs. "Well, that's nice of ya, thanks. Best be careful though, might start thinkn ya got some soft feelin's in there some where," she said grinning and punched him playfully in the arm.

"Feelin's? What're those?" He replied, keeping a straight face.

"Jayne." She rolled her eyes and started putting the tool back into the b

Comments
Sunday, 28 August 2005 07:04
Aw, Jayne is a big softie.

This made me giggle --> "He looked in the tool chest for something that looked like it might span things."

You know, before it got all dark. And you beat the hell out of the crew. At least they got through it okay.

Now why can't these two wacky kids just have at it, already?

Sunday, 28 August 2005 12:02
Loved this, and breathed a great big HUGE sigh of relief when the ship returned battered but in one piece with her precious but injured crew. So nice to everybody back together - well Inara will soon be on her way - and it was very nicely done how you showed a softer side to Jayne in his dealings with Kaylee. I also liked the symetry of Mal giving blood for Wash for a change. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 28 August 2005 13:55
Bravissimo, from fluff to a real exciting story.
PIXIEGRRL
Wednesday, 31 August 2005 05:27
My favorite part so far. Didya catch that "so far" bit? It'd be cruel and unusual to stop now. There needs to be more, less-than-brotherly thoughts followed by some less-than-brotherly actions... Please?

Oh by the way, I'm totally loving this series.
Tuesday, 11 October 2005 05:28
"He hoped Jayne had the sense to stay hidden until he thought of a plan. If he thought of a plan.
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Jayne had a plan." Okay, I freakin' loved this part and the whole thing. Also, "clocking" is a grand word I've never gotten enough of. Nice to see someone brave use it. I love Jayne and I'm not alone. I love big dumb brave cowardly sexy awkward muscular Jayne. You played him very well. I love Kaylee's bravery in the face of her greatest fears, giving herself for her men. And when she covered the bite marks with her hair so Mal wouldn't see...lovely. Only bad thing about this story is it ain't enough. But I have to wonder if it ever could be. I never want it to end, only to keep marching on and on into the black with us following. We can't help it, we'll follow. Thanks for a great trip.
-Roving Eye
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 21 January 2006 09:24
great series, so many awesome moments. i loved mal volunteering his blood for wash.

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