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Vengeance: Ch. 8 - Reflection and Betrayal

Thursday, August 18, 2005

What happens when you trust the wrong person? Mal is forced to stand down while Soul reflects on his past, and Early learns a hard lesson.

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Mal had to fight with his emotions for a moment, his brain fighting with his heart as he trained his gun on the imposing figure of Jubel Early. His finger tightened on the trigger, but he couldn’t bring himself to shoot. He didn’t know yet what fail-safes Early had in place if he was killed. Mal simply couldn’t risk Kaylee getting hurt any more than she already had been.

Kaylee…

Mal looked at his engineer, and his heart screamed in pain. He had vowed long ago to keep Kaylee innocent, to keep her safe from anything that would damage her sunny disposition; but he had failed, and seeing her now broke his heart. She was naked in the chair, obviously meant to humiliate her; but what caught Mal’s breath was her face. Bruises covered her left cheek, blood trickling from half-a-dozen little wounds. Her left eye was nearly swollen shut, and her lip was split. Still, amazingly enough, she had her head raised high, and that in itself lifted Mal’s spirit. Kaylee was brave, and Mal owed it to her not to let her down again.

“How’re you doin’, little Kaylee?” Mal asked softly, fighting to keep the anger from showing in his face.

“Cap’n?” she asked hopefully, looking around the room.

“I’m here,” Mal replied, fighting the tears that were threatening to pour from his eyes, tears of sorrow, joy, and anger.

“Oh Cap’n, I’m so sorry,” she cried, tear ducts opening.

Teeth gritting so hard his jaw was on the verge of breaking, Mal forced his gaze to remain on Kaylee. He could see Jayne out of the corner of his eye, rage written all across his features.

“Ain’t nothin’ here your fault,” Mal said to his engineer. “I don’t want you to be thinking none of that.”

Kaylee nodded slowly. She opened her mouth to speak again, but before a single word could come out, she disappeared. Vanished.

“What the hell!” Mal yelled. He took a step forward, finally letting the anger get the better of him as he pointed the gun right in Jubel Early’s face. “Where is she? What did you do with her?”

Early stared ba

Comments
Thursday, 18 August 2005 13:03
Excellent, excellent!

I love the intimation that Serenity is a ship with a past, and how Mal took out Early in the end.

Keep it up my friend.
Thursday, 18 August 2005 13:47
eek!

HOW is this going to end.

Oh, so glad Mal got to shoot Early.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 18 August 2005 13:50
Whoa.....Soul, you got the touch!!

Are you planning to publish this when you're done?
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 18 August 2005 13:52
Sorry, didn't realise I wasn't logged in.
Thursday, 18 August 2005 13:53
That's odd, every time I went to this it logged me out. Hope this gets it right. The 2 above were mine.
Thursday, 18 August 2005 19:57
Nice to see another installment. Had honestly forgot about this one, had to go back and reread the last couple of chapters to refresh my mind. Good chapter though.
Thursday, 18 August 2005 22:29
At last, that creepy bounty hunter Jubal Early is dead! It was such a long long wait until this part came along but so glad you didn't just give up and put your crayons away. Can't wait now for Mal and co to come up with a really shiny plan to rescue the ladies. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 19 August 2005 15:44
Ebo the too lazy to sign in says:

I lost a leg, thats so awsome.

My poor husband though, stuck with a baby and a dead Ebo...
Friday, 19 August 2005 17:00
Wow!

I loved this! Very powerful, emotional stuff!

The opening scene with Mal and Kaylee was cleverly written. Nice twist!

I loved the way that you described the emotional state of the characters - especially Wash and Mal. Powerful.

There was a strong level of maturity and a gritty nature to the action that I also loved. Especially the demise of Jubal Early!

Can't wait to read the next chapter!Keep up the supershiny work!

-Cos.
Tuesday, 23 August 2005 11:00
Ai yah!

Seems I was rightly pointed to this lil bit of fanfic magnificence.

When's the next part coming? *biggrin*

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