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TEMPTATION SERIES: 7. "Waiting"

Tuesday, July 12, 2005

"The Captain and Zoe go down to New Melbourne to meet a contact. River tries to warn the others when it all goes horribly wrong."

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TITLE: "WAITING"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: G.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "HEALING"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "The Captain and Zoe go down to New Melbourne

to meet a contact. River tries to warn the others when it all

goes horribly wrong."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"WAITING"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

"Why did you do it?"

The Captain frowned at his second. What the good gorram was this? "Do what?"

Although she was squinting into the harsh sun of New Melbourne he felt it was really a frown at him. Her subtle mark of disapproval aired on a neutral planet. "Forgive Jayne."

"Who said I forgave him?"

This time she turned her head and looked him in the eye. "Still walkin' an' talkin'."

The reference to Patience was not lost on him. And she had shot him twice. First time could be forgiven. The second? His stupidity. Only Zoe had a way of not saying it that hurt more. Like he had somehow let her down in the process. Kind of the feeling he was getting now but sharper. The only one besides Jayne who had been pleased with the Captain's decision had been the Preacher but then that was no surprise to anyone. Apart from the 'turning the other cheek' part of his faith, Book and Jayne were friends. Or. As close to it as made no never mind. Mal wasn't quite sure what that made him and the mercenary but the upside was that he didn't fear being set up or betrayed by the man again. Hence the upturn in his mood as his body recovered from this latest brush with death.

They stopped at the approach to a large town square. Even without any scanning equipment they

Comments
Tuesday, 12 July 2005 20:30
I just love the way you write Zoe deadpanning. Spot on.

And what a change to have Jayne being the one who understands River. After all this time, how can Simon be so dumb!

Looking forward to the next one
Tuesday, 02 August 2005 10:17
At last - chance to catch up with this series. Reckon I must read slower than you write, Ali. And then there's holidays ...

Anyhow, another great chapter. You know what I loved about this? River and Jayne - it wouldn't take much to convince me of that pairing right now *g*

Zoe was brilliant in this too. Absolutely spot on.
Tuesday, 11 July 2006 08:24
I liked Simons reaction to Rivers conversation.

It sounds like Simon, believing everything that's written in the books even when his own experience tells him the contrary.


Also I get to see river kick some ass.

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