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Home (Aftermath - Final)

Sunday, October 19, 2003

Everyone left on Harmony has been found, but did everyone come home?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3294    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: As ever, this universre belongs to others, and I have been visiting. Hope to do so again sometime.

This is the final part of this story. Sorry for the length and time taken. Life interferes occasionally. It has been tremendous fun, though. If any or all of it is posted elsewhere, please let me know.

*****

Zoe hit the throttle and the shuttle curved upwards at a reckless angle, barely missing the hilltop. Everyone grabbed whatever they could to keep from falling in the crowded space. Marcus and Frank, kneeling next to Mal, held on to him. Clutching Vera, Jayne made his way to the pilot’s chair.

“I reckon it’s safer for me to get us back to the ship. Go help Mal.” He looked at her with something akin to terror in his eyes.

*****

Wash hurried back up the stairs with a steaming mug. He pushed it into Inara’s cold hands as she listened intently to the voices and sounds coming through the speaker. When she ignored him, he lifted the cup up to her mouth.

“Drink.” He spoke softly.

Inara distractedly sipped the hot tea. She blinked and looked up at him. “Thanks.”

They both turned to the speaker when Jayne shouted at Zoe to go. River unfolded herself from the co-pilot’s chair and walked out without a word. Inara saw Wash was torn between the need to stay on the bridge and wanting to follow her.

“What’s going on?”

“Long story.” He waved in the direction River disappeared. “She’s reason Mal stayed on Harmony and told us to leave. Had it all set up with her and Simon. If she said anything, Simon was supposed to come tell him. And just now, she knew where to find him.”

“I don’t understand.”

“Looks like Mal was right. She is a reader.” He looked past Inara when a light on the console started flashing. “I’m supposed to be keeping an eye on her.”

“I’ll go.” The Companion handed him the mug and left.

*****

Zoe knelt at Mal’s head, fingertips pressing on his neck. “I can’t find a pulse. Is he breathing?”

Marcus, kneeling at the Captain’s

Comments
Sunday, 19 October 2003 03:22
Inara has to ... what? Leave? Or change her mind about leaving? Finish this, please! At least tell me what you meant by that...please? I enjoyed the whole story, but give closure on it, one way or the other. It's been a great story.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 19 October 2003 08:43
Great story, one of the best fanfics I've read. An epilog would be nice to maybe explain things and give us the happy ending we're hoping for -- no pressure of course. Seriously, I'll be checking back from time to time to see if you've written any thing else. Keep it up, you've got a gift for story telling.
Sunday, 19 October 2003 15:04
I loved this whole story to bits. It was driving me to dispair having to wait so gorram long between chapters but I love what you have done - all except for the ending. If ever there was a time for Inara to stop sitting on the fence now is the time. River had the rights of it to my mind and it would be shiny if the reader gave her a true insight into the reason why she shies away from the only real commitment that matters a damn to her. Hate that she keeps hurting Mal. What does the poor guy have to do to win her heart? Please consider an epilogue then sort Inara out. Once that is done we can feel rightfully proud of all your wondrous efforts and have a little smile on our faces for Mal as well. Now that would be shiny! Hugs and Thanks, Ali D :~)
You can't the sky from me
HUMBLE
Tuesday, 25 November 2003 23:54
tell me the truth: are you really joss whedon?
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 18 December 2003 04:25
OH MY GOD, you STILL left me hanging!!
I totally figured they were FINALLY gonna be togehter....please write something again on this...dont want nara to go :(
pilot_rita
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 18 December 2003 04:25
OH MY GOD, you STILL left me hanging!!
I totally figured they were FINALLY gonna be togehter....please write something again on this...dont want nara to go :(
pilot_rita
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 18 December 2003 04:26
OH MY GOD, you STILL left me hanging!!
I totally figured they were FINALLY gonna be togehter....please write something again on this...dont want nara to go :(
pilot_rita
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 18 December 2003 04:27
OH MY GOD, you STILL left me hanging!!
I totally figured they were FINALLY gonna be togehter....please write something again on this...dont want nara to go :(
pilot_rita
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 18 December 2003 04:27
OH MY GOD, you STILL left me hanging!!
I totally figured they were FINALLY gonna be togehter....please write something again on this...dont want nara to go :(
pilot_rita
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 18 December 2003 04:27
OH MY GOD, you STILL left me hanging!!
I totally figured they were FINALLY gonna be togehter....please write something again on this...dont want nara to go :(
pilot_rita
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 18 December 2003 04:27
OH MY GOD, you STILL left me hanging!!
I totally figured they were FINALLY gonna be togehter....please write something again on this...dont want nara to go :(
pilot_rita

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