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Waiting - Aftermath Part 6

Wednesday, July 23, 2003

It takes time to get there and back. Those left behind wait with the Reavers on their doorstep. Those making the round trip have to wait, not knowing what is happening.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3466    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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I think this is going to take two more parts (sorry, not in my control). Comments gratefully accepted, but please be kind (it's good for your karma).

As the sun cleared the horizon and the early shadows disappeared, Mal stretched cold, stiff, and sore muscles with little movement, something else he learned years ago. He laughed softly. If his legs were this sore, Inara must really be suffering. Good thing she was tucked away with the others in relative safety for a while. It would give her a chance to recover gracefully.

Mal wished he had binocs. He could see the Reaver ship was damaged, and from the look of it, recently. The large scorch marks on the hull were fresh and one of the nacelles had a chunk missing. This was not good. He thought the landing was very rough, even for them. Now he knew why. Several men were moving on and around the ship. They would not like being grounded any more than he did. He wondered who the skirmish had been with and just who won.

Movement near the town caught his attention. He saw a figure dart through the sparse trees near the smoking remains, and head toward the hills. Moments later, three more followed. They gained on their quarry with each step. He guessed the luckless wretch could only be another of the townsfolk left behind. Whoever it was must have been able to hide overnight, but either panicked or was found in the daylight. Maybe it was one of their own, suddenly the hunted instead of hunter, for whatever reason. No matter, the end would be the same.

Mal did not even consider raising the rifle that was tucked under the blanket at his side. The shot would have been very difficult at this distance, but at least the poor bastard would not know the particular pleasures the Reavers had in mind for him. Well, he assumed it was a man from his dress and gait. He didn’t take the shot, however. Couldn’t

Comments
Wednesday, 23 July 2003 07:20
Another exciting chapter!! KEEP it up, really well done :)
Anxiously looking forward to next chapter!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 23 July 2003 07:51
alotta-shiny! Cant wait for the next cahpter. I really dig this Mal & Inara characters. Lotsa Kudos!!!:)

Malinara
Wednesday, 23 July 2003 11:32
Love the story to bits and boy is it exciting! I had a horrible sinking feeling when Mal took wood back for them to have a fire in the cave. The Reavers seemed to leave far too easily, lulling them into a false sense of security. Gulp! Can't wait to find out what happens next. Thanks for a great story, just love Mal and Inara. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 23 July 2003 22:16
I really like where this story is going, and I'm hoping that we'll discover what is wrong with Mal that he keeps falling asleep and fell for the Reever's trick. If it was plain sleepiness on his part, than he's falling short of his previous abilities (fixing Serentiy while shot in the stomach, surviving torture, etc.)
Please, please, pretty please develop his relationship with River more because I love that. Mal and Inara are great, but they can only go so far, so he needs some interaction with River (they've got this great father/daughter on the verge of something deeper).
A scene with Mal and Book talking about Reevers and their place in the 'verse would be interesting as well, or possibly a fresh perspective from Kaylee or Simon on what they fear/think/interpret about them would spice it up a bit.
Friday, 25 July 2003 04:12
I waiting for this one, and now I still want more !!!!!!!!

This could make a great movie plot

Really like your Zoe, more commanding than in the show. Loved the line
" Otherwise, keep your mouth shut. I hear you say anything like that again, I will do what the Captain didn’t. Dong ma?” Her voice was even, but her eyes burned with anger."

Very Good
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 13 August 2003 07:28
FANTASTIC !!! Sitting on the edge of my seat. Can't wait for Chapter 7.

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