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Temptation

Saturday, April 30, 2005

As hard as he tries to say no, Jayne knows he'll keep giving River what she wants. Second in the Walking the Black series.

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Temptation

She came to his room.

His actual room, knocked on his actual door, probably woulda climbed down his actual ladder if Jayne hadn't flown up it and hustled her down the corridor and around the corner. "Crazy," he snarled, shoving her against the bulkhead. "You outta your mind?" Forgetting that, technically, yeah she was.

She looked at him wide-eyed, needy, then turned her head to stare down the corridor into the cargo bay.

He knew what she wanted. There was only one thing she wanted from him, ever, and he’d given it to her every night for the past week. He’d bitched and moaned the entire time, but he’d given it to her.

Escape.

River wanted out.

She wanted him to put her in a suit, open up the airlock, and stand guard while she danced the void. She actually trusted him to pull her in when her air was used up. She wanted him to tie her to the ship so she wouldn’t just float away, the way she wanted to but knew she couldn’t. There was just enough sense in her poor addled head to know that what she wanted most of all couldn’t ever happen, and she needed him for second-best.

Just him.

He sighed. More of a moan, really. Then he stepped back, turned her by her shoulders, and gave her a little push down the corridor.

She darted away like a butterfly, and by the time he caught up with her, she was suited up and ready to go. She jigged and jittered, babbling, as he double-checked hoses and gauges. "I’m dressed for the weather, and I’m going out to play--"

"How come this works?" he asked her. "Huh? Why should a space walk make any kinda difference?"

For half a second, her eyes cleared and focused. Then her gaze wandered to the window. "Shiny knights on spiky white horses have to find a new path through the enchanted forest," she said. "Can't if there's monsters in the way. No defense. Poor things don't have swords or turtles." She smiled a sweet, loony smile with teeth. "Suck the monsters out. Phoom. Blow up. Thermodynamics. Equilibrium. Internal pressure exceeds external

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Saturday, 30 April 2005 08:49
Of the two Jayne/River fics that just popped up - both excellent - this one just makes me giggle. You have an excellent grasp on the characters and a perfect handle on them. Congrats!
Monday, 02 May 2005 14:56
I could so see Jayne internally arguing with himself about giving in to River but with no more ability to say no than King Canute had trying to hold back the waves. Shiny fun, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 01 November 2005 17:52
once again-GREAT work, perfect description of their characters, sounds and feels like them too

thx again m8
Friday, 16 December 2005 12:00
Great stuff---a Jayne/River that doesn't include exchanging of fluids.I like.
Tuesday, 22 May 2007 22:14
it's so cute how she has him wrapped around her little finger. i knew jayne was a softy. :)
Sunday, 01 July 2007 05:27
Some of the best Rayne tales don't feature fluid exchanges, Mike...though it doesn't hurt the whole storyline;)

Another fabulous effort here, mosylu! Definitely loved this tale when I first read it and I still love it now:D

BEB

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