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Things Fall Apart - Chapter 3

Monday, October 13, 2003

This is the slow part, where Mal and the crew of Serenity come to grips with the news of the attack on Nexus 7 and begin to try to deal with it. An opportunity presents itself, but every decision has its own inherent dangers.

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Title: Things Fall Apart – Chapter 3

Rating: G

Disclaimers: Characters all belong to someone else, etc.

Author's comment: This is a bridging chapter, giving the bare bones of the story to come. Not a lot happens, there is some character exploration and interaction. I had to rewrite it at least three times as different ideas presented themselves later in the plot, so I hope I haven't contradicted myself anywhere.

Spoiler alert for anyone who may not have seen the unaired episodes in the US.

For those who may not know where I got it from….

'Turning and turning in the widening gyre

The falcon cannot hear the falconer;

Things fall apart; the center cannot hold;

Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world,

The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere

The ceremony of innocence is drowned;

The best lack all conviction, while the worst

Are full of passionate intensity.'

(excerpt from The Second Coming, W.B. Yeats)

Predictably the offices that housed the local law enforcement looked like they were under siege. It took Mal and Zoe the better part of an hour to make their way through the throng of people spilling out into the street. When they eventually got through the door they could at least watch the newscasts while they waited, although there was little new to report. Communications were sketchy, which was about normal for a Reaver attack. The first thing they did was knock out the communications array.

It did seem that several passenger liners and transport vessels had managed to make it off the station. They were being escorted by a couple of Alliance warships as far as Helan, which was the nearest planet with a military base of any size. The reporter added that there was no news on the status of the Alliance’s new colony ship, the Serendipity, which had been berthed at Nexus 7 in preparation for her maiden voyage. She didn’t appear to be among those heading for Helan, although the reporter was carefully avoiding drawing any conclusions from this fact. The whereabout

Comments
Tuesday, 14 October 2003 00:55
Great stuff. The only thing worse than reavers is the wait between chapters... I have my fingers, toes and legs crossed that they find Inara. Please keep writing, this is so good. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
INNOGEN
Wednesday, 15 October 2003 06:57
Finally! You SLACKER! <just kiddin', you know I luv this story>. Since we last traded waves I came up with some space station types and schemes and somewhat for ya. Circular, hollow, or like Larry Nivan? Or Niska's?? Miss chattin'. Drop me a wave, 'kay?

BTW: The suspense is building up wonderfully--which I know you have been aiming for.... Poor Shattered Simon...<oops, now you know what *else* I've been areadin' lately>

INN
Wednesday, 15 October 2003 23:35
"They only see what's on their minds, and I'll be out of mine" Brilliant! I love it.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 03 April 2004 19:47
hmm not read it yet - came across it while looking up stuff for my essay. do you know that there is a famous novel called Things Fall Apart by Nigerian writer Chinua Achebe? (title also taken from Yeats)
Tuesday, 09 May 2006 17:36
Ooooo, got me all excited to see this, complecated search and rescue op... agianst REAVERS!!! You gunna give us some more BDM moments of Reaver killin' excitment??? That would so totally ROCK!!! Oh... My... God... I finally cam up with a solid idea for a fic, just while I was writing this... and your lead up gave me an idea!!! *runs off happily to plan and start his fic*

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