Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Things Fall Apart Chapter 12

Monday, March 29, 2004

The Reavers have left, leaving Mal, Inara and River stranded on the Nexus waiting for the Alliance to arrive.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3164    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

Tweet

Disclaimer: Characters are the property of Mutant Enemy, as always thanks for letting me play with your toys.

Author's note: The guilt about the last chapter taking so long has meant that this one took less time than any of them. It helped that this time I knew where I was going, rather than having to figure that out the hard way. As a ploy to beg for forgiveness, I hope it works :)

Things Fall Apart – Chapter 12

There was the sound of booted footsteps coming down the corridor, and then hurried conversation just outside the door. A few seconds later, several sets of feet walked away. After that, there was silence.

Inara and Mal looked at each other and back at the door. The silence stretched. Mal stood up and studied the door speculatively, wondering if he’d be pushing his luck to try it again. He almost laughed. Since when had he started thinking of the fact that the ‘verse hadn’t managed to kill him yet as luck?

“Mal, do you think it’s wise?” Inara asked softly.

Without looking at her, he shook his head slowly and said, “Nope. But I ain’t in the habit of lettin’ that get in the way.”

The corridor was empty. Both Mal and Inara stared out the doorway for several seconds in stunned silence. Mal quickly stuck his head out, ready to snatch it back in again if anything moved. Nothing did.

“Well I’ll be….” He murmured. He gestured to Inara. “I think they’ve gone.”

“Are you sure?” She asked, taking a few steps over to the doorway to have a look herself.

“Only one way to be.” Mal stepped out into the corridor, and when he didn’t die he looked both ways and frowned in confusion. “Which way is it to the airlock?”

Inara followed him, poised to bolt at the slightest sign of movement. “That way leads back to the theatre. We can get back to the banquet hall from there.”

They looked at each other, both silently acknowledging the likelihood of getting even that far. Mal wanted to say something comforting, but he was suddenly and uncharacteristically afraid to tempt fate.

“Well, w

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 29 March 2004 08:51
Hell, remember the last time, I nearly fell off my chair when I saw you updated. Well, I almost did it again. Not because it took you so long, but because you updated so quickly. As always I am loving this story, one of my favorites so far. I can't wait to see how you're going to resolve the issuses of River, Mal and Inara. I loved the scene when Kaylee greeted Inara back on Serenity. It was so in character. Great Job!
Monday, 29 March 2004 16:21
Shiny! Nothing else does my heart good than an update from you. This was quite enjoyable, actually. Characterization was dead on. The Inara/Mal relationship keeps me happy. LOL!
Monday, 29 March 2004 18:04
Nothing like surving a close encounter with Reavers to make our intrepid heroes feel safer than they ought to. A gripping story, this has been, and I'm anxious to see how you conclude it.
Monday, 29 March 2004 18:05
Great, good to have another part in the story. No sooner do our heroes escape the Reavers than they have the Alliance on their tail! Can't wait to see what happens next, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Post Your Comments

You must log in to post comments.