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STOLEN MOMENTS: 13. "Articulation"

Sunday, April 10, 2005

"Mal gets more confused when he wakes up than he was before he went to sleep. Simon picks his moment not realising what he is getting into."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4541    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "ARTICULATION"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Mal/Inara. Simon. River.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "MANIPULATION"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Mal gets more confused when he wakes up

than he was before he went to sleep. Simon picks his

moment not realising what he is getting into."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"ARTICULATION"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

He woke feeling a deep wash of contentment. More rested than he could remember since the War. The first thing to impinge on his drowsy consciousness was his surroundings. In particular the luxury of the big comfortable double bed and silk sheets. Realisation snapped his eyes open only to find he was alone. Where was she? Had it been nothing but a gorram dream? If so, what the *diyu* was he doing lying in her bed? And naked? As his mind whirred with questions the shuttle door opened and Inara stepped in, closing the door softly behind her before turning to face him. A smile softened plush lips, her eyes seeming to mock the confusion of feelings jockeying for position on his face.

"Did we...?"

Amused she folded away the smile but left the echo dancing in her eyes. "No."

More confusion. "We didn't...?"

"You needed to rest."

"You kissed me."

"Yes."

"All over."

There. Definite mocking now, he was sure of it. She did not answer this time.

"An' the hands..."

"You were tired, I needed to relax you."

His eyebrows shot up. "That what they call it now?"

"Mal, you were still on edge."

"Gettin' shot'll do that to a man." He grumbled. "Not that I suggest you try that." He added quickly. "Bes

Comments
Sunday, 10 April 2005 03:34
Wowwy. Yep, better than a wow, it's a wowwy. I loved this chapter. You had a very cute Mal/Inara interaction at the begining. And than of course, the Simon/Mal interaction earned you the wowwy. It was so... I don't know how to describe what it was to give it justice. It was just great. And I'm left with wondering if Mal really will remember their conversation. Once again Ali you have acheived pure excellence!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 10 April 2005 05:49
wow. i can't believe simon!! whwn will he learn? River knows best
*shakes head* tut tut
someone's going to be in BIG trouble

great chapter. give us more :P
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 10 April 2005 05:49
wow. i can't believe simon!! whwn will he learn? River knows best
*shakes head* tut tut
someone's going to be in BIG trouble

great chapter. give us more :P
Tuesday, 12 April 2005 14:24
Shiny!! It figures that Simon would be getting tetchy about River's relationships with the crew. "Shush...don't make faces!"

Keep Flyin'

K
Wednesday, 13 April 2005 00:51
Ok so not that I'm one to demand speed in posting, since I go for months at a time without writing. That having been said, I need part 14 quickly. This series was instantly addictive. Like smack quality addictive and I need a fix soon.

Phaedra

P.s. Since I have failed to write in before. Please allow me to acknowledge the obvious. This is a brilliantly written series.
Thursday, 21 April 2005 19:35
Naughty, inventive Simon.

Reader-y Mal.

Or deeply intuitive?

Nice. As usual.

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