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Things Fall Apart - Chapter 2

Monday, September 29, 2003

Mal and the rest of the Serenity crew are stuck on a backwater moon when they hear about the Reaver attack on Nexus 7, and Kaylee tells Mal that Inara was on board.

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The usual disclaimers apply. The characters are not my own, but very gratefully borrowed.

The previous chapter was more of an introduction, and sets the scene for this one. It takes place approximately 4 months after Heart of Gold, which was aired last in the series over here. Spoiler alert for anyone who hasn't seen that yet.

For those who may not know….

Turning and turning in the widening gyre

The falcon cannot hear the falconer;

Things fall apart; the center cannot hold;

Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world,

The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere

The ceremony of innocence is drowned;

The best lack all conviction, while the worst

Are full of passionate intensity.

(excerpt from The Second Coming, W.B. Yeats)

Things Fall Apart - Chapter 2

The bar is crowded, dirty, noisy and obviously not in the expensive end of town. It’s mid afternoon and the place is full of a variety of spacer riff-raff from the nearby shuttle-port. A vid-screen is playing a noisy re-run Western above the bar, and a couple of pool tables are seeing heavy business. Wash, Zoe and Jayne are sitting at a table near the entrance, and by the number of empties it’s obvious that they’ve been there a while.

Jayne put down his mug. “Hey, I’m jus’ sayin’ that we can’t sit around hopin’ something better’ll come along. We gotta be thinkin’ of our options, is all.”

Wash, who has one arm around Zoe, shrugged. “I don’t see the Captain going for it. Heck, I wouldn’t go for it if we had anything else likely on the horizon.” He looks to Zoe. “We got anything else likely on the horizon?”

“Nothing that pays,” she replied. “And we haven’t got the fuel to get us somewhere that might.”

Jayne scowled into his beer. “We ain’t had nothin’ worth doin’ since Inara left. Never would’ve thought one whore could make such a diff’rence.”

“Jayne,” Zoe said, voice icy, “You use that word in the same sentence as Inara again – ever – and I’ll let River play with you.”

“And I’ll be selling the tickets to the show,” Was

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 29 September 2003 21:52
Excellent! Poor Mal, if it's not one thing it's another. Hmm, Reavers? Or someone using them to blame it on so they can get up to some right nasty mischief? This is ruttin' good, can't wait for the next part. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 29 September 2003 22:41
Great! Not only am I addicted to one other fanfic on this board, this one has to come out of left field. Waiting anxiously till you next installment but until then, KUDOS!

Nadia
Tuesday, 30 September 2003 12:25
I'm new to fanfic - but I'm really enjoying this story! The characters are true to the way they were on the show and I love the plot - lots of possibilities for things being not quite how they seem...


Can't wait for the next installment!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 01 October 2003 18:54
I'm so excited by this story! Lots of possibilities with this storyline.

Please write lots more! I eagerly await the next installment.
Friday, 03 October 2003 23:07
Why are you making me suffer? All I wanted to know is if Inara is not being eaten... 'corse Mal's reactions are incredible, and you clearly defined Mal's relationship with Inara & Zoe's relationship/understanding of Mal... Really great development, but I'm still on the revelations of Nexus 7, that's the part that's really important to me!
Thursday, 08 September 2005 16:48
You're too good to me, really you are...

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