Blue Sun Room FICTION - SUSPENSE

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Sunday, March 13, 2005

Ch1-5 --> Chapters that have previously been posted have been heavily revised.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3647    RATING: 8.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimers: Firefly doesn't belong to me, that honor goes to Joss, Mutant Enemy, Fox, and Universal pictures.

A/N: K, this technically isn't an AU – season happened as shown. But it is somewhat of an alternate interpretation of characters and alternate history. Many thanks to my beta readers shdwdrgn, neroli66, and cassiee. Also, much credit for the origin of the bunny that grew into this story goes to Zoid and the ideas he posted in a very old thread about Zoe.

I hope to do better about posting fairly regular updates :) Enjoy

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Chapter 1: Orders

Chinese Glossary

Tai-kong suo-yo duh shing-chiou doh sai-jin wuh dhu pee-goo! - Stuff all the planets in the universe into my ass!


Quietly, Zoe made her way to the bridge. She'd heard the Captain's bunk close earlier so she knew he'd finally finished his late night wanderings. Wash slept fitfully; she always wore him out on these days like this. Everyone else should be quietly asleep, but she checked the lock the bridge door just in case.

She paused before turning on the cortex. Something was different now, she felt it. This call might be the one that would change her life. Once she would have welcomed it, the boredom had come close to driving her mad. Instead of giving in, she'd fought back and married Wash. The relationship gave some distraction and gained her some distance from Mal. She wasn't sure he'd forgiven her, but then that had been the point.

Sighing, she turned away from the past and toward the now. Time to be the person she was again, time to learn if the path would change. Her body hummed with anticipation as she turned on the cortex and dialed the number. When the well known face appeared on the screen, she allowed a genuine smile to show.

"You're late," the person said.

"Couldn't be helped, you know that."

The gray-haired woman nodded. "Very well. I'm sending you the details now. Will you be able to convince him to take the job?"

Zoe smirked. "Low as coin is, all I'll have

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ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 13 March 2005 23:40
I'm not exactly sure where you are going with this but it is certainly interesting. I can't really see Zoe turning against Mal and Wash like that but I'm very curious to see what your plans are. Keep writing!
Monday, 14 March 2005 00:31
Very shiny though it is hard to think of Zoe betraying Mal let alone taking Wash into danger which means the brain washing thing. I like Stu though, even if he did slug Wash I think he wants to do the right thing. Simon getting ansty with Mal feels out of kilter considering the Captain is his best chance of finding River. But the best bit is how you write River, absolutely excellent! Can't wait for more, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 17 March 2005 18:27
Wow. I'm really liking this take on Zoe's past. I have to agree, you've got River down perfectly. More please!!

- Soul
Friday, 20 May 2005 06:37
What the?!!? With the Wash and the Zoe and the River?!?!? With the betrayal and the Wash learning to fall badly!!?? Well written, but the why and the with and the hurting of my brain...

River's coming off well, as is Wash. It's very odd to see Zoe taking the role of conflicted loyalties and you are doing well with the application. It is Zoe, just alot that I couldn't think to apply, I guess. We all take for granted that Zoe and Mal are inseparable that it gives this story alot more of a twist.

Good stuff,

Keep flyin'

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