Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Things Fall Apart

Wednesday, September 24, 2003

Starting approximately 4 months after Heart of Gold, presuming that is the end of the series. Inara gets herself in the middle of a battle between the Alliance and Reavers.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3002    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Please note usual disclaimers and acknowledgments apply, including one for the title. Thanks to all those who gave me encouragement and ideas, and my apologies if my Chinese is not up to scratch.

This is set approximately 4 months after Heart of Gold, which was the last episode aired in the series on my side of the planet. Spoiler alert for anyone who doesn't know the ending.

For those who may not know the inspiration....

Turning and turning in the widening gyre

The falcon cannot hear the falconer;

Things fall apart; the center cannot hold;

Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world,

The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere

The ceremony of innocence is drowned;

The best lack all conviction, while the worst

Are full of passionate intensity.

(excerpt from The Second Coming, W.B. Yeats)

Things Fall Apart - Chapter 1

The banquet hall is ablaze with light, ceiling and walls hung with banners and the tables covered in flowers. Groups of people in formal attire mingle, a good number of the men in dress military uniform. A band is playing traditional music, and is barely audible over the hum of conversation. At one end of the room the ceiling disappears and a wide vista of stars is visible, partly eclipsed by the curved hull of a space station. A ship moves gracefully across the field of view, lights glimmering over its surface. The station is Nexus 7, a hub of trade and transport between the Alliance worlds and the Rim, considered by many to be the last bastion of civilization in a galaxy that becomes progressively more lawless the further from the Core worlds you go.

Inara Serra stands at the top of a wide flight of stairs at the entrance to the banquet hall, staring up at the view port, entranced. The handsome young Chinese man in uniform who’s arm she holds stares at her with almost the same expression.

“It’s quite breathtaking, isn’t it?” he says.

Without taking her eyes off the view, Inara replies, “That it is.”

The young man follows her gaze. “I see it from the deck of

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 24 September 2003 20:22
Oh damn, I couldn't resist! It's me, the eeeevil lurker *g* Things barely started! How dare you stop there!

!!!

Okay, I'm better *g*

I'm intrigued, I like the conversation between Wai-lan and Inara, and you've almost captured Inara perfectly. The one thing I'll disagree on is her wishing Mal was there to think of a plan. Inara was as much brains, if not more, than Mal. She just doesn't have the brawn.

I see you share my fetish for present tense :P

More!(more!)More!

*raises a Nekkid Mal* Here's to hoping that this was the teaser scene, and the next installment is a nice juicy chapter!
Wednesday, 24 September 2003 21:05
Ooh. Very interesting. Want to see how it turns out.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 24 September 2003 21:18
Isn't there more??

But I want more. *whines*

I like what you've written so far very much. Your style is fluid and very readable.
Wednesday, 24 September 2003 22:42
I like this, laughed a few times at the conversation between Inara and Wai-Lan. I wonder who is attacking the space station. An intriguing start, keep going, can't wait to see what happens next! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 26 September 2003 01:05
OMG!!! Get back to work...

Please

Nadia
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 26 September 2003 09:08
Cmon there must more right? Bring it on !!

Malinara
Tuesday, 30 September 2003 18:26
Very engaging. Made me think of a possible starting point for the film.
Thursday, 08 September 2005 16:35
ooh! scary biscuits!
Saturday, 25 November 2006 22:16
thanks for clearing up the inspiration on the title, I had Achebe in mind not Yeats and that would have implied a completely different story ;)

I like that Mal's left a mark on Inara's approach to life. I hope it serves her and Wai-lan well.

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