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Blue Hand Blues: Track #3-The Breakfast Show

Thursday, March 3, 2005

This is the third track in the album. In it, we see the reactions of the crew members to Rivers' new talents, and River cheers up a bland breakfast with some blues. To get more mileage out of reading this, listen to John Fogerty's cover of "The Midnight Special" off of the LIGHTNING IN A BOTTLE album. Trust me, it's worth it. Feedback appreciated and all cpoyright rules applicable here.

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No one spoke. No one knew how exactly to approach a 19 year old girl who just blew their minds and eardrums with a rendition of a piece by Bach as done by Jimi Hendrix. She had some some rather amazing, and downright scary, things in the past. But this pretty much blew every thing she did out of the water. Jayne, still with a look of dumbfounded ness, finally broke the silence with one of his lines of introspection.

“OK. What the hell was that?”

As Simon rushed down the metal stairs of the catwalk to check on River, Wash idled casually up to the railing and smiled.

“Hendrix.”

“Shenme?”

“She was playing that song in the fashion of Jimi Hendrix. He was this legendary guitar player on Earth-That-Was. Prodigy, really. Just like her. Don’t know what song she played, but it’s still kick ass. I particularily liked it when she picked at the strings with her teeth.”

“Her teeth pickin notwithstanding, how the Hell did she learn how to play like that?”

As Wash told the Captain and everyone else about the guitar she showed him and the music he had on the ships computer, Simon looked over River to try to get something of an answer to what she just did. River was still frozen in place, with her head arched back, her knees flat with the floor, her fingers locked in place and a look of transcendence on her face. Suddenly, her eyes snapped open and she looked up at Simon.

“You like?”

“What’s that?”

“Do you like it? I spent the last two nights recording the tracks, arranging the phrases the way Jimi would have, and learning how to pick at the f-string with my two teeth without breaking the rhythm. The least you can say is that I was merely adequate.”

“Merely adequate? Mei mei, that was the most incredible thing I’ve ever seen you do! The form, the discipline, the way how you managed to add a psychedelic touch to the violas and the bases, and replaced the brass with an acoustic that soared. I’m so proud of you.” Simon leaned in and hugged her, despite the Allen One getting in the w

Comments
Thursday, 03 March 2005 02:03
Pretty soon, ya'll be playin' " The thrill is gone..", as River been payin' dues since she wuz born. Mayhap she'll tell us her side sometime. Needless to say, it will be an interesting day...

Keep flyin'

K
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 03 March 2005 02:49
BC here:

That was amazing. Wow! Incredible talent to give River. :)
Thursday, 03 March 2005 03:17
I really like the concept here and the storytelling is good. The prose needs to be a bit tighter and the characters occasionally don't sound quite like themselves. But they're getting close. Keep up the good work!
Thursday, 03 March 2005 04:17
You know I love your work. I really love how you used a song to describe Kaylee and another one as sort of a warning to the rest of the crew in general. It would be interesting to see which songs you would select for each individual crew member.
Thursday, 03 March 2005 12:02
Very good, I could so easily imagine this because River is still very much an untapped resource and is so gifted as Simon told us so eloquently in the pilot episode, "Serenity". Way to go, keep flyin'! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 03 March 2005 19:34
Rock the blues!!!

- Soul

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