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Destiny: Ch. 10 - Bringing Down Dragons

Friday, February 11, 2005

Serenity and Destiny team up in an attempt to bring down the Trans-U, and where is River Tam?

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Wow, this Chapter has been a while in coming! That's what happens when RL intervenes. Enjoy!

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On-Board Serenity

Mal grabbed onto the back of Wash’s chair as his pilot jerked the controls yet again, sending Serenity into a nose dive and eliciting a string of curses from Zoe.

“Language, dear,” Wash said simply, his calm tone a sharp contrast to the insanity of his flying.

Mal couldn’t help but grin, but even as the smile cracked his lips, he saw the exhaust of yet another missile stream past them, and he remembered the seriousness of their situation. Over the ship-to-ship intercom, he could hear Destiny’s pilot Hesh yell out as the Reaver-filled Trans-U bore down on them, followed by Etris’s eternally calm voice issuing a series of orders. Mal then issued his own orders, and Wash adjusted his course to try to draw the Trans-U away from the other ship.

The sky around them was filled with nearly a dozen other ships, all trying to evade the massive Reaver ship. The ground beneath them was littered with the burning carcasses of at least another dozen ships that hadn’t been as fortunate. As Mal watched, a missile from the Trans-U ripped through a ship to their starboard, a Magpie, like Monty’s. The Magpie listed to one side and began to fall, dropping only a few meters before it’s main engine exploded, taking the rest of the ship with it. Mal closed his eyes. No one deserved to be slaughtered like that.

He grabbed the intercom mike and spoke briefly to Etris. Ignoring Wash’s glances, Mal laid out his plan.

“Do it,” Mal said.

Wash pushed the controls forward, and Serenity dove for the burning tarmac. On the radar screen, Mal could see Destiny following behind them, and then the large shape of the Trans-U. Apparently, out of all of their options, the Reavers had decided the pair of Firefly’s would be the juiciest treats.

“Okay Wash,” Mal said, “let’s see if you are as good as you claim.”

Wash looked shocked. “How could you ever doubt me?” He flicked a series of swit

Comments
Friday, 11 February 2005 20:36
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh!!!!

I've got goosebumps!!! That was well worth the wait!

There were a lot of great touches.I liked the part: 'Gorram Preacher’s rubbin’ off on me, he thought.'

I loved the description throughout. It was a tense, action packed story!

Supershiny story SOS!

MORE!!!!
Friday, 11 February 2005 21:07
You're a mean man! A damn fine writer, but still mean mean mean!

And what a GREAT notion - exactly how the fellas with the blue hands utlized the wand has probably been theorized a plenty around here, but I like your idea. And how Jayne didn't care so much that River was flying when really he should have gone freakizoid - that was a choice bit too.

What am I saying - this whole chapter was choice. More please!
Friday, 11 February 2005 21:09
Good action writing and the ending was very well done.

Certainly makes the reader eager for the next part :-)
Saturday, 12 February 2005 00:30
Cliff hangers are much more enjoyable from the writers stand point of view.

Hint: MORE SOON!!!
Saturday, 12 February 2005 00:48
Gorrammit this was brilliant! Can't wait to find out what the good gorram happens next. Very exciting and well written and I just loved the way you wrote Jayne. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 12 February 2005 00:54
Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice!!!

Keep it coming my friend.
Tuesday, 15 February 2005 19:18
Damn. Just... damn!

Good action. And all cliffhangery at the end. Nice.
Sunday, 19 June 2005 08:37
So that's where River went too...

Isn't it 'Fireflies' instead of 'Firefly's'?

Pish posh, good stuff,

Keep flyin'

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