Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

From the Inside

Tuesday, February 8, 2005

This is the first part of a multi-part series. It's just the openning of the door so it's a short one. Zoe and Mal on the job, reflecting on what's important, and as always, a bit of peril.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2258    RATING: 8.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“Come in! Come in, please.”

Mal and Zoë exchanged a look as they followed the man into the large office. Zoë’s brows were drawn together and her mouth was tightened at the corners. Mal was wearing a pleasant smile. Each one had known the other long enough to understand that neither of them was pleased with the situation.

Zoë had been unhappy from the moment Mal had told her he’d decided to take the job. She’d been with the Captain too long to make the mistake of thinking he was stupid or crazy. She knew he had a special mix of the two, but it was a stupid-crazy that had kept them flying this long, so...

The plans that he’d made over the years had put money in their pockets and fuel in Serenity. She just wished that when Mal was making some of his captainy decisions he would try to figure in how to get a job done without shooting or stabbing or brushes with Feds or being outgunned or anything else that resulted in them getting the short end of the stick.

In fact, she’d brought up that very point earlier that morning over a mug of what passed for the local brew on Harmony.

“So you don’t like my plans, is that what you’re saying?” Mal had said, as they sat drinking in the dirty bar that could have been on any number of rim planets. He was talking a little fast the way he always did when he was feeling tetchy.

“Not at all, Sir,” Zoë replied

Zoë was an amazing woman. Mal had always thought so. And while he sat there drinking some warm almost-beer he could see the gears in her head cranking out exactly what she should say to make him see her way of things and have him feel good about it all at the same time. She called him “Sir.” She didn’t make too much eye contact to make him feel threatened, but just enough to keep him from going on the defensive. It didn’t make him angry, knowing all of this,

Comments
MAR
Tuesday, 08 February 2005 06:27
qing wa cao de liu mang = frog-humping son of a bitch
This swearing s just wonderful.

My god... book worm evil man just wont know what will hit him... it will probably be Mal's bullet.

^^ Yay, waiting for more.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 08 February 2005 06:50
Interesting start, I hope there is more to come soon. I can't wait to see how they're going to escape this creep.
Tuesday, 08 February 2005 10:21
Loved this to bits. The interplay between Mal and Zoe was so delicious and right on target. Terrific characterisations. I am amazed though that Mal didn't end that *tamade hundan* the moment he struck the girl. The only odd thing was the bar being called a pub. Can't wait to see what happens next, this is just so utterly shiny! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 08 February 2005 17:21
Well they say start as you mean to go on so I'm thinking this is going to be a hectic ride.

Very interested to see where you're planning on taking this :-)
Tuesday, 08 February 2005 21:52
Man...that guy better watch out. Once Mal can get help for Zoe, that guys gonna get an ass whoopin'!
Wednesday, 09 February 2005 21:11
Good start with this! I'm thinking that there's more going on here than Mal realises. Great job. More!

- Soul
Thursday, 10 February 2005 19:10
I echo the praise, and second the calls for more.

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