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Turn of the Wheel Part One

Thursday, December 2, 2004

A Firefly "What if?" story. A possible future for Serenity's crew...how much change can they withstand?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4625    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Posting at the request of Gabriel and ManiacNumberOne.

Rather interesting timing, as I wrote this story two years ago this month.

Rating: PG-13

No archiving please.

Author's Note: As a rule, I don't like to give away too much about a story. I have very mixed feelings about specific types of warnings. And by saying that, I've already said more than I like. Let's put it this way: I was influenced by the dark side of Joss while writing this one.

Disclaimer: This is a work of fanfiction. No infringement is intended on the rights of Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy, or 20th Century Fox TV. This time, the monkeys were evil. (c) HawkMoth, 12/29/02.

Dedicated to the brilliant cast of Firefly, for making us believe in these wonderful characters so completely.

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"Turn of the Wheel"

by HawkMoth

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Don't know how, but we're still flying.

Seems like it's awful hard sometimes. Too much has changed. But sometimes the going is easier, and the crew still has confidence in my ability to command, to keep them alive. Wish I shared in that more completely.

If it hadn't been for some tender-hearted rich folk in the Core, funding new colonies out here on the farthest edge of the Rim, we might've run out of business opportunities long before this. Good thing the Alliance doesn't much care if money's spread around among so many poor worlds, so long as enough's still being spent on the central planets. Good for them–better for us.

Even better–the ones out here that control the flow of that money don't seem too particular on who they contract with, for honest jobs or messy ones. This ship and crew have a reputation for getting the job done, no matter what. Means a lot to folk. Means a lot to us.

This latest job shouldn't be too troublesome. I head up to the bridge, to check on how we're progressing. Wash is navigating us into the approach, heading for a world still without a name. We're bringing in a load of genseed and farm equipment.

"We're shiny, Captain," he says when

Comments
Thursday, 02 December 2004 16:19
Damn...this is so good, so poignant. This story is gripping my heart. I'm glad you decided to post it again!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 02 December 2004 17:50
Not fair! not fair! I read it at work (during lunch) and.. and.. got tears in my eyes with the last breath from Mal.
Not something you should be able to do to a 40 years old!
Good work
Thursday, 02 December 2004 19:33
Much as I hated you killing off Mal the first time I read this story, it is just so rutting good, so heartbreaking, and leaves that painful hollow ache of loss. But the writing is so shiny and seeing Simon come into his own is great. Well done and thanks, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 03 December 2004 02:18
BC here


Whoa, good story. And such a surprise. Really well written.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 03 December 2004 05:35
Yeah, you managed to sucker me completely; I thought the interaction with River and Kaylee was a bit off, and then you revealed it was Simon, not Mal. I actually stopped reading for a minute in bemused appreciation.

And the rest of the story's good, too.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 03 December 2004 06:50
OMG! Must say that's the first time a fan fic has brought me to tears. Excellent job.
~Mai
Friday, 03 December 2004 07:17
Simon and Mal have a lot in common despite the differences on the surface. At least, I've always thought so.
I was also suckered in the beginning, just in case you've got a scorecard lyin' 'round.

Keep flyin'
Friday, 03 December 2004 16:06
Thanks, everyone, for the feedback. (My "evil" reputation still stands, I see.) Sorry for making people cry...

Note to CastIronJack: It was various discussions of those similarities, while the show was still on the air, that helped inspire this story.

And, umm, yeah--keeping the narrator's identity fuzzy was part of my nefarious plan.


~~Moth
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 22 January 2005 13:29
This is heartbreaking, nearly brought me to tears - its beautifully written and subtle use of emotion.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 06 December 2005 00:33
Whoa! Whoa, whoa, whoa.

Whoa.

That was good. When you revealed it was Simon talking, I swear I stopped and sat back in my seat, blinking in surprise. I did NOT see that coming.

Excellent work!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 23 March 2006 14:13
Wow!
Thursday, 23 March 2006 16:24
Gorram, this is good stuff!! I was posting like mad for a fanfic like this but I didn't bother looking for one... and yes, I got the idea at like 4 in the morning, sorry if I think its an interesting idea to have Mal dead.... Im a strang strange person at 4 in the morning

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