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Firefly: Hidden Mind Part 2

Saturday, October 30, 2004

Here's part 2 of my firefly story. Don't read this unless you've read the 1st part or you won't have a clue of whats going on. Enjoy!

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Lt. Furlong & Cadet Caleb stand waiting at the hanger door awaiting the docking of the strange looking ship. It was a fine

looking design. Lt. Furlong had to wonder who was on board. Cadet Caleb commented that judging by the sophisticated design

& the request they had received recently about firefly traffic info, it had to be The Blue Sun. Lt. Furlong was about to

voice his concerns again, but was cut off when the hangar doors opened & in stepped 2 immaculately dressed men & a tough

looking man in a 1 piece, blood coloured leather outfit. This man held a weapon pointed at them. Taking his cadets lead,

Furlong raised his hands in surrender. Then one of the neat looking men stepped forward. "Hand me the information, now!".

Furlong nodded to Caleb & Caleb handed over the data pad. The man took it & walked back to his associates. The 2nd neat

man stood forward & held out small silver tube. When he held it at arms length, a glowing blue wire jetted out from both

ends. Furlong & Caleb wondered about this, but not for long. They became puzzled by an intense buzzing noise inside their

heads. All of a sudden, they started choking. The blood was free flowing from their eyes & noses. In a final blood

spattering, gurgling pop, they fell to the ground, hearing nothing but the screams of the rest of the crew & seeing only

the blue hands of their killers. & then.......nothing. The rough man looked at the dead bodies in amazement. "A very

efficient weapon. I don't suppose I can forgo my fee & take that instead". The 2nd neat man puts the device back in the

inside pocket of his coat. "Mr. Early, our technology is beyond your ability to understand. You will take your fee when

the job is done". The 1st neat man says "We hired you because you know the ship we're after & how to get on board". Early,

remembering how the crew of Serenity overpowered him, says "I know all too well gentlemen". He now has a very serious look

on his face. "Oh, how I'm looking forward to seeing them again".

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Back on board Serenity, J

Comments
Sunday, 31 October 2004 10:08
Is Jason going to single-handedly save the crew from the hands of blue? And how come he isn't nervous and frightened for his life now? That must have been some conversation he had with Mal. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 02 November 2004 20:20
All will be revealed in the final part. I actually hadn't written anything about the conversation between mal & jason, but you're right, it needs to be adressed. the story would make no sense if i didnt mention this. I'll be writing it into the final part, which will be posted soon
Tuesday, 02 November 2004 20:22
I also forgot to say that in the part of the story where simon tries to persuade jason to stay, i mention that jason is struggling with his decision. so i left it open for jason to do the right thing & return.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 04 November 2004 22:37
This is truely wonderfull writing! I can't wait for the final installment.

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