Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Destiny: Ch. 7 - Advancing the Plan

Wednesday, October 27, 2004

The Blue Hands begin their search for River while Anne keeps the 2 crews distracted. Inara finds herself in the company of someone unexpected and what is that on the horizon?

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Descrp: Response to Inquiry – Process Breakdown – Status Report

Process # 1: In it’s simplest term, to read minds. To gain access to memories, both remembered and forgotten. To hear thoughts before they become spoken words. To infiltrate that most private of havens: the human mind.

Process # 2: In it’s simplest term, to manipulate minds. To take those stolen memories and make them more real than the current reality. To confuse thoughts and contort what the brain believes to be real. To make the senses believe in what is not really there.

Process # 3: In it’s simplest term, to destroy minds. To combine both previous processes to rape and ravish minds to the point where all mental activity ceases. To kill without any chance of resuscitation.

Number of Students to achieve Process # 1 with the use of a Mental Device: 42

Number of Students to achieve Process # 2 with the use of a Mental Device: 29

Number of Students to achieve Process # 3 with the use of a Mental Device: 11

Number of Students to achieve Process # 1 without the use of a Mental Device: 5

Number of Students to achieve Process # 2 without the use of a Mental Device: 2

Number of Students to achieve Process # 3 without the use of a Mental Device: 1

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Shadow

Volk returned to Serenity’s cargo bay, where Ketter waited, the other man’s expression making it obvious that the result of Ketter’s search had been as fruitful as Volk’s.

“The Tams are not here,” Volk stated.

Ketter’s face contorted with annoyance. “This is not the way things are supposed to work. River Tam is proving to be more trouble than we originally expected.”

Volk nodded in agreement. He looked around the dirty cargo bay, and for a moment he had to fight off an urge to escape to someplace cleaner. All this time searching for the Experiment, and instead of boarding the Exitor with River Tam in tow, he found himself once again with a failed plan. How was it that they had bee

Comments
Wednesday, 27 October 2004 18:21
First rate! I love how you're doing the suspicions and glimpses. Zoe staying as far away as she could--very effective. And how you made me feel bad for Mal without ever actually showing him.

Great suspense cliffhanger ending.

And in the intro: "Number of Students to achieve Process # 3 without the use of a Mental Device: 1". Chilling and intriguing.

Fine work! Thanks for sharing it.
Wednesday, 27 October 2004 22:15
Intriguing and interesting. Wonder who or what the imposter really is and what happened to Mal's real mama. I did chuckled at River's assertion that Inara was going to save her and Simon. Looks like that will be news to Inara as well! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 28 October 2004 21:14
This is a truly fantastic story! I can't wait for the next instalment. I'll admit that I would be sorely disapointed if, once it is finished, you didn't try and get it published!
Friday, 12 November 2004 16:46
She looked across town, across the buildings lit by the occasional lantern towards where Serenity and Destiny sat on the docks, looking like two birds straining to spread their wings and fly.

And that, my friend, is it. Right there. The reason why, while that salesman in OoG was droning on about the rocketship, Mal's attention was directed elsewhere. THAT is what he saw when he first laid eyes on Serenity. A ship that wanted to see space every bit as badly as he did.

just keep writing... just keep wri-ting...
Friday, 26 November 2004 09:36
I knew that River was going to fly the coop. Knew it.

I think you are hitting your stride.

And the Reavers are coming?!

Keep flyin'
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 26 November 2004 12:11
Whoah..Whoah..WHOAH! REAVERS!!!
*Deep breath*

^ Those were the words that came out my mouth when I read that cliffhanger ending.

A brilliant piece of writing SOS! This is complex and exciting reading!

I liked the part with Simon, River and Inara. I could imagine it happening on the show.

The Blue Sun Report at the beginning was also good. The last sentence was pretty chilling stuff!

Supershiny work SoulOfSerenity! Bring on chapter eight!!
Friday, 26 November 2004 12:14
^ That was me. (Got logged out.) *crap*

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