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Monied Individual - Part X

Tuesday, July 26, 2016

He’d never had much to do with horses, having always been more interested in things that flew rather than things that trotted, but he had to admit that, close up, they were quite interesting. With quite a powerful odour that wasn’t unpleasant – in fact it reminded him a little of Jayne after he’d been working out, but he decided, wisely, not to mention that fact to the big man.

[Maya. Post-BDM. Mal and Badger have a chat, Alex extends an invitation, and Hank decides to play protector. A longer chapter to make up for the delay!]

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“You keep coming round people’re gonna start thinking you’ve got the hots for me.” Badger leaned back in his seat, showing off what was probably a fairly new wifebeater, but on him everything looked dingy.

Swallowing back the slight feeling of nausea, Mal said, “Nothing could be further from the truth.”

“And where’s Freya?”

“My wife has other things to attend to.”

“Pity. She brightens a man’s day and puts lead in his pencil. Still, this one does nicely.”

Zoe caressed the butt of her Mare’s Leg.

“If you don’t want to do business, that’s fine by me.” Mal pulled the Land Deeds from the pocket of his coat. “I’m sure the Fosters’d be happy to get these back.”

Badger sat forward, his eyes gleaming. “Are they …”

“From the safe, yeah. Nothing in the way of pretties in there, but you did mention anything else that might be.”

The crime boss of Persephone – if only in his own head – held out his hand. “Hand ‘em over, then.”

Mal shook his head. “We haven’t decided on a price.”

“You gonna make me pay?”

“We went to some little trouble for these. Could’ve been bound if we got caught. I think there should be some recompense, don’t you?”

“How about my goodwill?”

“How about the truth of what’s going on with Pike and the Triskelions?”

Badger’s eyes narrowed under the shade of his hat. “Why should I know?”

“Because I know you. Because I think you and Pike are as thick as thieves, and you know damn well Hank ain’t a Triskelion.”

“No idea what you’re talking about.”

“Fine. Then maybe your friend …” He made show of reading the details on the papers. “… Winston Downey would be willing to help. Seeing as it’s his name on these deeds. I’m fair sure the local Alliance station would give me his address. A’course, they may not take too kindly on money-lending outside the official channels.”

Badger glared, then his face broke into a cold smile. “I nearly told old Seppy you wouldn’t fall for it. But I decided to sit back and watch the fireworks.”

“You’re right, I

Comments
SARATAI
Sunday, 28 August 2016 08:37
So...lots to say on this chapter. I like the mysteries you are putting into the series..Badger's name and Mal's family. Gives the story more depth than having it be just about the Triskelion heir. Having Badger mention a threat to Hank's life makes the plot around him a little more dangerous, which is nice. I liked that Zoe wasn't sure what to make of it, which felt real, because how do people react when loved ones are in danger? They tend to be a little freaked out rather than clear-headed. I liked that Freya was checking on the kids, feels very natural. I did wonder about the hint that Ben was claustrophobic, because in a earlier story, you had Hank get claustrophobic from a specific incident, rather than a had-from-birth kind of phobic fear. The bits between Mal and Freya on the shuttle and Zoe and Hank in the armory were both sweet and enjoyable to read. The story is shaping up nicely.
SARATAI
Sunday, 28 August 2016 08:37
So...lots to say on this chapter. I like the mysteries you are putting into the series..Badger's name and Mal's family. Gives the story more depth than having it be just about the Triskelion heir. Having Badger mention a threat to Hank's life makes the plot around him a little more dangerous, which is nice. I liked that Zoe wasn't sure what to make of it, which felt real, because how do people react when loved ones are in danger? They tend to be a little freaked out rather than clear-headed. I liked that Freya was checking on the kids, feels very natural. I did wonder about the hint that Ben was claustrophobic, because in a earlier story, you had Hank get claustrophobic from a specific incident, rather than a had-from-birth kind of phobic fear. The bits between Mal and Freya on the shuttle and Zoe and Hank in the armory were both sweet and enjoyable to read. The story is shaping up nicely.

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