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Monied Individual - Part IX

Sunday, June 26, 2016

Inara stood up gracefully, despite her pregnancy. “You’re making plans, Mal. And we all know how they usually turn out.” She raised an eyebrow at him, cocked her sleek head, and swept out of the kitchen.

[Maya. Post-BDM. A little family time. Read, enjoy, please review!]

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He’d never had that much success with the opposite sex. Oh, it was fine after they got to know him, and he’d bedded a few, but with Risa saying yes when she did, and then Zoe, he was somewhat inexperienced in that regard, at least compared to someone like Jayne. And he’d never had someone throw themselves at him. Or even stand there naked in front of him, her satin nightgown pooled around her ankles. If she hadn’t looked so bored it might not have been so bad.

Hank swallowed. “Uh … Cora …”

“Yes?”

“Ain’t you … uh … in the wrong room?”

“No.” She stepped forward out of her nightie. Which meant a step closer to him, and he was already backed up against the window.

“Cora …”

“Yes?”

He tried to speak but his voicebox had frozen. He coughed to try and clear it. “Cora …”

A faint look of amusement crossed her features. “Yes?”

“What … what are you doing here?”

“I’ve come for you. To be with you.”

“I’m married.” Gorramit, why did he have to be so attractive to young women now ?

“So?” She idly pulled at a strand of deep red hair, tangling it around her finger and giving him palpitations. “I would be better. I could be anything you wanted. I would make a good wife.”

“I have a wife. Already. And believe me, although I’m sure you have very nice qualities, she’s all I can handle. And all I want.” Now the words were rushing out, as if they were afraid to stay in his mouth too long in case they changed. “So you’d be far better off putting your … your … whatever that is … back on and finding someone who’s not, actually, married. More your own age. Yes.” He rubbed his hands together and nodded at the same time. “’Sides, you might catch your death, wandering around the corridors like that.”

She stared at him, her face now blank, then turned and leaned forward to pick up her nightgown.

Hank thought he was going to have a heart attack and closed his eyes quickly.

“I told him it wouldn’t work.”

Without thinking he looked again, to see her drop the garment o

Comments
SARATAI
Monday, 27 June 2016 13:19
I liked that you kept Zoe listening rather than coming out to play. I actually thought you would have her come out and punch Cora (a la Saffron in Trash). I liked that you have Zoe going to meet Badger with Mal. Lately, you've had her on the side and had Mal taking Freya as his meeting back-up. That always seems odd to me, since he and Zoe are always portrayed as such a melded battle pair. And Zoe is nauseus and can't eat...are you hinting at pregnancy? I'm looking forward to the meeting with Badger. Is Zoe going to be a little irritated at some point with all these people setting up Hank? She seems very patient so far in letting it take its time in unfolding. I'm glad Mal is expressing a bit more 'interest' in finding out the underpinning of this plot surrounding Hank. Jane0904, I love your writing. You really need to sit yourself down and write a novel and self-publish on Amazon. Firefly or not -- you weave a great tale!
ALISOSIA
Saturday, 18 March 2017 07:31
Great chapter
Very classy of Zoe
Really feel for Ethan, that Bethie is a little brat, cute and sweet, but a brat that needs a little more discipline
Can't wait for more

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