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Secrets - Part XXVIII - Conclusion

Thursday, November 5, 2015

River shook herself, turning from the rabbit hole. She didn’t feel like being Alice, and while Jayne’s grin sometimes made her think of the Cheshire Cat, the dormouse was asleep and likely to remain so. Of much more interest were the secrets. So many, some old, some new, some borrowed and some blue. And for once she didn’t care if she was referencing the Earth-that-was marriage ceremony. That wasn’t the point. Inara, the Bodens, Harper Lecomb and the Culver diamond, Randall Lecomb and his homicidal tendencies … all secrets, overlaid with the flavour of the Alliance and their need to control.
[Maya. Post-BDM. Secrets comes to a conclusion, but some are still waiting to see the light of day.]

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“Mal, can I have a word?”

Mal turned from where he was inspecting the weather with Mr Boden at the back door, to see Dillon in the kitchen. “Sure. Long as it’s only one.”

“How does Freya put up with you?” Dillon asked, shaking his head in mock disbelief.

“Must be my love-making skills.”

Mr Boden coughed politely. “I think I’ll go check on the generator, make sure there is no incursion of water. Unless you gentlemen require anything?”

“Nope,” Mal said, smiling slightly. “But I kinda like being called a gentleman.”

Mr Boden inclined his head and moved out into the rain.

“Whatever Freya sees in you, it isn’t your tact. Or breath-taking wit,” Dillon observed. “You scared him off.”

“I’m pretty enough to make up for it.”

“You keep telling yourself that.” Dillon grinned.

“That it? You just came to insult me?”

“As much fun as that is, no. I was actually wondering if you’d be going anywhere near Persephone. I overheard you saying you’d be leaving soon.”

“As it happens that’s probably our first port of call. But ain’t you already got a lift?”

“Alex and Ellen are heading back, probably this afternoon, but I think they’d like a little alone time.”

“I know the feeling.”

Dillon ignored the interruption. “So me and Breed wondered if we could come with you? There’s no ship leaving Lazarus that’s going anywhere near the Core for at least a month. We’d pay our way, of course, and while I wouldn’t mind some of that alone time with Breed myself, from what I heard of Phoebe and Rosemary’s plans …”

“That bad?”

“Even a sly feller like myself might not be safe.”

Mal laughed. “As much as I’d like to pass on that little trifle to ‘Nara, I conjure it’s better out of sight, out of mind. And we’ve got the space, since I presume you’ll be bunking up together.”

“We will. As long as you don’t think we’ll be corrupting minors.”

“I’m not so sure about Jayne, but I reckon the kids know about you and Breed. It ain’t like it’s the first time you’ve been on board.”

“Yes

Comments
Thursday, 05 November 2015 23:41
Thanks I loved it all!
KAS
Wednesday, 11 November 2015 08:17
Thank you!
Thank you for finishing Secrets, and thank you for doing it so well.
This was one of my all time favorite story lines and I am already looking forward to your next effort.
Again, Thank You!
SARATAI
Sunday, 22 November 2015 08:21
So you know, Jane0904, your Mal/Freya storyline has been my all-time favorite fanfic for Firefly and will be incredibly bereft when you stop writing it. It has kept Firefly alive for me. Before you finish your storyline, please, please, have Zoe and Hank have a brother/sister for little Ben. You are one of the few authors who writes Zoe really well - the conversations you write between Zoe and Mal, Zoe and Freya, Zoe/Wash are some the best Firefly writing around. And the character of Freya has been a wonderful addition to the crew ----- I can so see her in the universe.
DUNLUDJIN
Wednesday, 25 November 2015 19:32
I'm extremely sorry to see you moving on from FireFly. While I understand your reasoning, the selfish part of me is crying.

At least we have two more stories to look forward to.

Thank you very much for your efforts.Your stories are by far the best Fan Fiction I've read over the last 20 years, bar none.
KATESFRIEND
Friday, 27 November 2015 07:32
Your writing keeps Firefly alive for me, as your story lines are so ingenious and satisfying. Time keeps moving on, and when you've moved on I most likely will too. I was really hoping to see the story lines go or years and years buy I understand everything has a natural lifespan. But I will dearly miss the entertainment and thrills you've given us here and the thoughtfulness in character development and consistency. Thanks and I will definitely stay tuned for the rest of your stories.
Sunday, 17 January 2016 10:29
I love how this story keeps continuity, picking up threads left dangling from the series even as it weaves new glowing stuff into the tapestry you've created. I'm fascinated in particulatr by the musings on things genetical, from the hungry cat to the super-pax.

Jane0904, I come back to the 'verse looking to read your stories, after years out in the black. As several others have said above, your version of events has become canon to me. I can picture each one of the characters you've created, and those you've grown and aged, in my mind's eye. While perhaps the sheer numbers of your readers have shrunk, the hunger--dare I say gluttony--of your loyal readership only grows to compensate.

Thank you for spinning this yarn a little further.

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