Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Secrets - Part XII

Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Her face looked back at her, make-up only a little smudged and appearing almost normal. Almost. Hard to see that she was dying. [Maya. Post-BDM. Everyone's waiting for Simon to work his magic, but Inara has secrets of her own.]

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“You’re it!”

Bethie squealed in something like a cross between frustration and annoyance, reaching out to tag Ethan back but he danced out of her way, laughing.

“I’ll get you for that!” she promised running after him, then darting to her left and catching Ben on his shoulder. “You’re it!”

Ben groaned. In the game they were playing in the area behind the house he’d been ‘it’ more times than he could count, and he was out of breath from running. He stopped, leaning forwards with his hands on his knees as he tried to pull air into aching lungs. “Gorramit,” he muttered.

Molly, standing by the back door so she could referee, with Fiddler and Giselle on leads snuffling around her feet, shook her head. “Language.”

Ben lifted his coffee face to her and grinned. “Sorry.”

“Well, I’m sure it’s not the worst you know.”

“It isn’t,” Ethan agreed. “Cal’s first word was a curse.” He glanced across to where the little boy was happily toddling among the vegetables and pulling up weeds like his mother had shown him.

“Mine was Dada,” Bethie admitted, standing with her fists on her hips since the game seemed to have stalled. “I said it to Uncle Mal.”

Molly laughed. “I doubt your Pa was too happy about that.”

“He wasn’t.”

“Well, I don’t know what mine was.”

“Mine was the co-ordinates to Persephone,” Ben said. “But then my daddy is the pilot.”

“What about you two?” Molly asked Jesse and Hope, who were sitting on a blanket making flower chains out of some late daisies they’d discovered.

Jesse just shrugged, but Hope said, “I think I asked for paints.”

“Sounds about right,” Ben said, smiling at her. Then he reached out and touched Bethie’s arm. “It.”

Bethie stamped her foot and growled, while the autumn air was filled the giggles.

The sound didn’t reach the man lying flat on his stomach a distance away, a long-range ‘scope held to his eye. He stilled as the young woman darted from her position by the door to pick up a crawling baby making a determined bid for the wide

Comments
Wednesday, 12 February 2014 02:06
Plenty of ominous in an otherwise idyllic scene.

As usual the slow build has the pressure cooker steaming up nicely.
Wednesday, 12 February 2014 06:06
Plenty of ominous in an otherwise idyllic scene.

As usual the slow build has the pressure cooker steaming up nicely.
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Saturday, 15 February 2014 08:20
I loved your nod to alternate universe stories and as usual your foreshadowing is excellent. Glad to see more - this is a great story and you've got me guessing on all fronts.
Sunday, 16 February 2014 05:33
Loved the scene with Mal and Freya but worried about the man spying through his gun sights. Kind of surprised that River hasn't picked up on it. Kaylee made me smile but I feel so sad about Inara. Bad enough to be dying but fighting so hard to keep it from everyone isn't the answer, she is denying herself comfort and the shock to Sam and her friends will be heart rending. So wonderful to devour another of your delicious chapters, Jane0904. Shiny! Ali D :~)
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