Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Rayne Delay

Monday, October 18, 2004

The follow-up to "Called on Account of Rayne". A service call to an Alliance core world goes awry when an old nemesis reveals Inara's connection to Simon and River to the Alliance. Meanwhile, River and Jayne's new ship hits some rocky seas.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4037    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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                               Firefly: "Rayne Delay"
                                   MAL (V.O.)
                         Previously on "Firefly"
                                   ZOE
                         She said that fuzzbuster we got
                         from Reid could give us an extra
                         hour's warning of an approaching
                         Alliance ship.
                                   RIVER
                         I wasn't born a killer. I was
                         conscripted.
                                   JAYNE
                         Them blue hands guys...They was
                         what killed those men?
                                   RIVER
                         With their brains.
                                   KAYLEE
                         The synchronizers we picked up on
                         Ariel make a funny noise now and
                         then. 
                                   SIMON
                         Mei mei? Were you sleepwalking
                         again?
                                   RIVER
                         The feet didn't move. Only the
                         head.
                                   SIMON
                         Lately, she seems to get tense the
                         moment I walk into a room. 
                                   RIVER
                         They're coming.
                                   KAYLEE
                         It's never the right time. So kiss
                         me again, nee mun!
                                   RIVER
                         He does love you, you know.
                                   RIVER (CONT'D)
                         We are one.
                                   ZOE
                         We're overdue. I need to see my
                         husband again, sir.
                                   MAL
Comments
Monday, 18 October 2004 19:36
Great work! The Jayne/River thing is kind of a stretch, but you pull it off. I noticed a lot of song lyric lines, which was fun (running with the devil, etc.), but was a little overused. The plot is cool and well-paced. Very nice!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 26 October 2004 23:04
I hate being redundant...but you are so good at this...they should hire you.
Lee
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 05 February 2006 13:25
good job :)
Thursday, 24 May 2007 01:35
Re: the smell.

It was coming from Yo/Saf/Bridge. Although she no doubt showered and scrubbed and perfumed as she could, try as she might she couldn't quite get the smell of being locked in a dumpster in the desert off her entirely.

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