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The Serenity Gig-Chapter 2: Exposition

Sunday, October 17, 2004

This is the second part of my Serenity Gig series. In this one, Shooter meets the different crew members. Music is referenced and seeds are sown for the big day itself. Feedback appreciated.

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After setting up my editing bay in one of the shuttle, I decided to take a look around the ship and meet the crew Kaylee had raved so much about. I learned that the ceremony itself was to be held in the cargo bay, since it was obviously the largest room on the whole ship. They had a makeshift altar already set up, with an aisle and seat markers taped on the floor to indicate where everything was. I thought the chair idea was a bit redundant since there would be roughly about six people sitting for the ceremony. I set up where my tripod and my smaller cameras would be as Kaylee taped some second hand wedding decorations around the railings of the stairs and catwalks. After setting up, and arguing with her about the choice of music for the final film, I walked around the ship and met with the different crew members. Kaylee wanted the video to be just as much about them as it was of her and Simon, so I spent the remainder of the day visiting.

The first person I met was the pilot, a guy named Wash. I liked him a lot. He was as friendly as Kaylee, he really knew how to fly and navigate, and he loved the Classic Rock Movement of the mid to late 20th Century. I’m really into that kind of music, even though it’s about 500 years old. Not that many people nowadays know about the The Beatles, The Band, Bob Dylan, The Who, Pink Floyd, The Rolling Stones, Barenaked Ladies, Tenacious D, AC/DC, U2 and the likes. But he really got a kick out of listening to some of the old mp3 discs that you’d find in the old CD stores. He then introduced me to his wife, Zoe. When I saw her, I thought “Man, I would’ve loved to have been at their wedding.” As she explained her capacities on ship and how she and Wash had met, I couldn’t help but think that right there was an example of how love can confound expectations. Before them, I had never seen an interracial couple, where it was white dude/black chick. Usually, it’s the other way around. She looked like the kind of gal that if a guy ever tried to come onto her, she’s h

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Sunday, 17 October 2004 05:06
I hope you realize those nasty images weren't aimed exclusively at your story--they were inserted all over the whole site and on lots of the stories, mine included. --Guildsister
Sunday, 17 October 2004 05:41
I know. Still, it would be better that I get a response that doesn't sicken me. BTW, what did you think of this installment.
Sunday, 17 October 2004 19:30
First-person narrative can be tough in that every single moment of the writing is a direct, personal reflection of that single character, of his personality, his viewpoint, and his perceptions. I think you held true to a well-realized and portrayed character POV in 'Shooter'. You created a decided flavor and character in this person. Shooter's not a particularly likable character, somewhat abrasive, but that works, too. *** Shooter feels a bit like a time-traveler dropped down in the Firefly 'verse, with the constant 20th century refs, music and technology. Film? Haven't dealt with film in nearly twenty years, barely deal with videotape any more. In ten years time we won't. *** Very intriguing idea of an outside observer (documentary shooter) at Serenity Valley. Hope you persue that further.

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