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THE DEVIL'S CRADLE: 12. "Mixed Fortunes"

Monday, June 18, 2012

He felt helpless, unable to give her a definitive answer when the problem he was staring at should not be able to exist.

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TITLE: "MIXED FORTUNES"

SERIES: THE DEVIL'S CRADLE

CHAPTER: 12. Sequel to "OUTMANOEUVRED"

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

PAIRING: Zoe/Wash Kaylee/Simon Mal/Inara

RATING: PG-13

SUMMARY: "Simon worries about a disturbing development

in the Captain's condition. River helps solve a problem for Zoe

and the Hunter finds himself in a unusual position."

"MIXED FORTUNES"

A "Firefly" Story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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"I think we got them all."

Zoe did not nod. River had said they hadn't got everyone and though neither she nor Shepherd Book knew how many crew members Rufus Pol had she was inclined to err on the side of caution. They had spent hours searching the old hulk of a terraforming ship without success. To all intents and purposes the crew were secure in the lock up but the ship was huge with who knows how many nooks and crannies in which a person could hide. Zoe was thankful that River had told them about the voice activation option on the lock up, something Rufus Pol had never bothered with but that was now keyed in to her voice and her voice alone. Those men would not get out unless she personally released them so if someone else was at liberty on Rufus's ship he would be unable to release them. While not a perfect solution it was the best they could do short of being able to account for every last man. She could ask Rufus but knew he would not be too inclined to help them.

"Still need to keep our eyes open, *dong ma*?"

Book nodded and followed Zoe up the ramp onto Serenity. Once inside he watched the first mate raise the ramp and lock up after them.

"If there is someone else out there, no sense lettin' them get on board Serenity."

"Do you really think there are any more of Rufus's men out there?"

"Just because we can't see th

Comments
Tuesday, 19 June 2012 02:39
That was interesting ending.
Tuesday, 19 June 2012 04:26
Oh, wow, interesting chapter. River's capture of the wayward crew member was awesome. Lucy's section was very tense, I'm still worried about her. I'm glad Simon's surgery appears to be successful but I'm guessing Mal's still in for a rough time of it. And what does River know? I'm eager to find out what's coming next.
Tuesday, 19 June 2012 10:21
Twists on top of turns, but at least Mal looks to be out of the woods. Although knowing you ... Great stuff!
Tuesday, 19 June 2012 10:36
I'm glad you are finding it interesting Nutluck and Ebfiddler. River in fighting mode is always awesome I agree. As for Lucy you will have to wait and see. The Captain is no longer in a life threatening situation though the recovery will be a mite painful. You will soon find out what River knows and why that clock is ticking. Yes, lots of twists and turns Jane0904, just how you like them! Thanks to you all for the shiny feedback, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Thursday, 21 June 2012 22:24
OK. Inara was in two places at once? I was confounded a bit...shapeshifter about? Excellent chapter, AliD, ratcheting up the suspense, as ever, xie xie
Friday, 22 June 2012 12:42
No, she wasn't Malsdoxy. If you read it again you will see the part where Simon tell's Kaylee she just missed Inara. Inara had prepared the meal earlier and put it on a low heat then left it for later when the whole crew could sit together and eat it. That was when she went to see how things were going in the infirmary and offer any help. Hope that clarifies it for you. Glad you are enjoying the suspense and thank you for the feedback. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Saturday, 23 June 2012 15:26
Ah, I see, my reading comprehension skills have deteriorated somewhat...looking forward to next chapter eagerly
Saturday, 23 June 2012 19:09
No problem, MalsDoxy, just glad you are enjoying it! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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