Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Indigo - Part XXX

Saturday, April 28, 2012

Maya. Post-BDM. Jayne has a close encounter with the slavers' ship, Mal converses with Cutter McCoy, and River does her thing.

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Using his feet on the rock of the overhang to slow his descent, Jayne lowered himself down towards the Barracuda. The pop of a rifle behind and below him showed Indigo was watching his back, although it wasn’t likely to be long until the bad guys got tired of being picked off.

A shout made him glance down. Someone had seen him, and in the flash of movement he knew that same someone was bringing a rifle to bear on him. He bent his legs and pushed off from the ledge, dropping ten feet at the same time, but Indigo had seen. The rifle popped again and the scream indicated Indigo had been accurate. Still, it also indicated there wasn’t any time left.

He’d spent a hurried two minutes before starting this escapade to jury-rig three grenades into a single unit, and now he pulled them from the improvised sling around his chest, twisting the detonator of the first with his teeth. There was a hum, growing louder with each heartbeat, and he tossed it towards the top engine port of the Barracuda. Barely waiting long enough to see it slide inside, he began to climb back up the line as fast as he could, quickly reaching the overhang so he could use his feet, but it still wasn’t fast enough.

The explosion that shredded the Barracuda’s engine intake seemed to rattle the air, the shockwave pulsing through the rock and knocking him sideways to slam into the cliff face. His breath was forced painfully from his lungs by the impact even as he was showered with snow and stones, growing as the overhang disintegrated in front of him.

Trying to gasp air like a stranded fish he hung onto the rope, buffeted from below by further explosions and from above by the rockslide. His hands slipped down the line a dozen inches, then more, burning his palms, but he managed to grip harder, and even to pull his dead weight up towards the lip.

A large stone bounced off his shoulder, and for a long moment he wondered if the tree he’d used as an anchor might not come loose itself, sending him into the maelstrom below, but he fin

Comments
Saturday, 28 April 2012 12:50
Yay, this was brilliant! All action and so great to see Jayne put those grenades to good use though for a moment I thought he was going to get seriously hurt his own self. And I just love the Mal and Frey interaction, that Sharps really is a nasty device so good that she destroyed it once its' work was done. Hopefully the slaves will not be slow in reclaiming the freedom that was taken from them. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
KATESFRIEND
Saturday, 28 April 2012 15:46
Glad to see some more of this so soon! Poor slaves have been locked up for too long or is something else going on?
LINDERLOO
Monday, 30 April 2012 16:30
I've been lurking a long while. When I first found your writing there were dozens of chapters already posted. Then I came to the 'last one' and was like "Whoa! It can't just end there!?!" After reading so many chapters continuously it's torture waiting for the next one, LOL! Keep up the great work! Love, love, love your writing.
BYTEMITE
Monday, 30 April 2012 20:17
I like how the improvised cluster Jayne (as I will now call grenades strapped together for a bigger blast) took out part of the hillside.

And poor River. No, admitting you're crazy to a bunch of scared prisoners probably doesn't do much to convince them that you're not going to kill them. I liked her telling the one lady to not be so stereotypical.

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