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Family (Part 13/14)

Monday, March 19, 2012

Rescues, executions, guilt trips, burials and news.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3147    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The posse was at least fifty men strong, and they barged into the yard on horses and hovercrafts, weapons a-blazing. They weren't targeting the house but the thugs attacking it, and they soon had them surrounded and hurdled together like sheep. Those who tried to escape were pursued and easily apprehended, those who were stupid enough to fight back were efficiently killed or wounded. The whole thing was over in a matter of minutes, and then the sounds of battle died away.

Mal had been watching through the windows, and now he staggered to his feet, gently swatting at Simon's fussing hands, and made his way towards the door. Before he could reach it though, someone called out from the other side. "Don't shoot, we're friends!"

"Same to you," Mal shouted back, but didn't lower his gun.

"Radiant, you and yours alright?" the person at the other side of the door continued.

Radiant finally let go of Mattie's arm, then rose and straightened out her clothes before making her way to the door. Mal and Zoë followed her, at least pretending to be ready for more trouble, but when she unlocked and opened it, it was clear that the fight was indeed over. She stepped outside, acknowledging the man who'd called for her with a nod. He looked relieved to see her, albeit a little ashamed.

Before neither could speak a word, Jayne came rushing down the stairs. "Gorramit!" he yelled, barging his way out of the door, pushing away both Mal and Zoë in the process. "Don' let him get away!"

"He won't get far," the man insisted. "He's got nowhere to run."

Jo came too; she was limping a little and clutching her side with a bloodstained hand, but her eyes were at least as determined as her brother's and she bore them into the men. "'Bout time you grew a backbone," she said, but the tone in her voice told them she wasn't totally ungrateful for their intervention.

Mal leaned against th

Comments
Monday, 19 March 2012 19:16
The funeral was a good touch of writing, as was Zoe calling Mal out and his continuing guilt over his plan not working out as well as he'd wanted.
Tuesday, 20 March 2012 18:13
Loved this chapter. Thank god the towns people came to help.

I'm glad that Jayne was the one to shoot him...

Can't wait for another chapter:)
Tuesday, 20 March 2012 23:43
And so ends the loathsome MacHaig. Actually, I'm amazed he got away with his bullying for so long. I'm glad the factory workers finally stood up to him, and surely it was only just in time for the Cobbs and the crew. And not in time at all for Obadiah. Jayne's passing of the crest to Jo was a fine moment. Liked the scene between Mal and Zoe. Mal's plan was not so very brilliant this time, although I imagine parts of it went as planned.
Thursday, 22 March 2012 00:15
I really liked that MacHaig got ended by Jayne after admitting he killed his daddy. Very old testament but fitting. Also how Zoe was so in character with putting Mal right when he already knew it but needed it saying. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER
Saturday, 24 November 2012 16:31
Mal is a strange duck...he's far from stupid and can come up with plans rather well, it's just that Mal is getting too reliant on Hail Mary plans that are resource-intensive but will pay off big if things work out right. Didn't pay off right this time and he's really starting to doubt his ability to command because he can't see not taking a higher road that is morally better but reality poor :S

Fantastic climax to the story, MarKomi!

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