Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Family (Part 12/14)

Tuesday, March 13, 2012

The crew's fighting for their lives, and Mal concocts the worst back-up plan in his unseemly career.

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Mal was crouched down by the window, armed with nothing but his handgun, and cursing himself for not bringing more weapons into the Cobb home. But then again, he hadn't expected an attack.

Or had he?

In hindsight, it was clear that they should've been better prepared for this kind of situation. He should've known a man like MacHaig was crazy enough to pull a stunt like this. He'd credited him with too much intelligence, and the rest of the people in town with too much bravery and common sense. It was so obvious now.

He should've listened to Jayne, was the horrifying conclusion to this train of thoughts. Should have let him gun down the hundan at first sight. He'd miscalculated the situation completely, perhaps not even bothered to calculate it at all.

"Zoë!" he hollered towards the kitchen, where his first mate and Fergus had gone to cover the back. The radios were back on Serenity and the only way of communicating was by shouting, and it was hard being heard over all the firing. "D'you see anythin'?"

"Only the torches!" Zoë yelled back. "I'm countin' ten back here."

Mal cursed again. It was the same at his front. In the blackness of the night, they could only see the lights, not the actual men carrying them. And he saw at least fifteen moving torches in addition to Zoë's ten.

Twenty-five men, then. At least.

He quickly scanned the room. Radiant was to his left, hunched down by the other window, at the moment reloading her rifle. Mattie was still by the trap door, gripping his gun with a passion. His eyes were wide, but glued to the door; he was ready to perform the task Jayne had left him with. River lay on the floor next to him, whimpering with terror. And Simon was in the corner with Obadiah, and Mal noticed how he was working a lot slower and less frantically now.

Not a good sign.

A wave of guilt washed over him. This was all his fault. He had accused MacHaig for being arrogant, and

Comments
Tuesday, 13 March 2012 20:55
Yay, sounds like the townsfolk have turned up to help! Least that is what I am praying for. Phew, they really do get themselves in some scrapes and where are Jayne's beloved grenades when we need them? Love this, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me"
EBFIDDLER
Friday, 16 March 2012 05:58
Yep, gotta agree that it was a back-up plan without much going for it. At least Jo had her night vision goggles. But it looks like help has arrived. Agree with Ali that Jayne shoulda brought his grenades! I'm counting on you to pull them out of this disaster, MK. Exciting chapter.
Saturday, 17 March 2012 10:39
Yep, Ali and eb, Mal should probably let Jayne handle these kind of situations in the future. Often the simplest solution is the best :)
Thanks for commenting.
BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER
Saturday, 24 November 2012 16:22
Certain moments in the BDM are getting a whole new context, mainly the moments of Jayne being a one-man arsenal before the trading station robbery (and Mal's refusal of the grenades). Shoulda learned, Malcolm...shoulda learned ;P

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