Survivor: No River Runs Here (Chapter 1, Part 1)
Saturday, February 25, 2012
C1P1 The brutal world of the Academy awaits.
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Disclaimer: I by all means necessary am clearly rolling in dough because of this Fan Fiction- as a matter of fact I am earning so much from it that I intend to buy the rights to Firefly off of Fox just so that I will never have to type this again. No but on a more serious note I do not own nor do I intend to reap monetary reward from the use of any characters/objects/other copyrighted stuff displayed within the Firefly series!
The world exhales a large breath- and in such a fluid motion the Autumn winds caress the clumsy wheat stalks which seemingly bend to avoid nature's kiss. The smooth lips of mother nature feel odd against the coarse tusk of the plants. The light from the sun finally reaches the crest of the world- and dips below- slowly sinking in the sky as to resist its needed departure. Finally the moons fill the sky- and the lamps of the universe look down upon the planet- all is harmonious- all is a dream.
Light pierces my sleep. It invades my eyes- but it is a foreign invader- it is not the same form of light that my eyes claim custom too. Blur crowds my vision- and I jab my eyes back closed. Finally the blur of waking retreats from my eyes. A shiver crawls down my spine as my situation reveals itself. I slowly try to raise myself- however my progress is immediately impeded by a sharp pain that rivets my ribcage. My head falls back onto a cloud- a pillow, but I cannot ret
Please- I beg you- feel free to give me any advice or criticism that crosses your mind- as your counsel is always welcome.
"You can't take the sky from me!"
- Thank you for the support guys!
- this is a pre- river chapter (as the title hints) (Sorry Amdobell!)
- I am glad you guys like the way that the story flows- no joke it was one of my larger fears (and one reason that I started off with journals) that you guys would think it gibberish- which would suck because it is the way I think...
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