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Survivor: Introduction

Saturday, February 25, 2012

SIntro This work will try to explore the brutal world of the Academy- get ready for insanity.

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Survivor: A Brief History of the Academy

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authors note: listen I know many of you might feel that this maybe re-writes some history or such, but I refuse to believe that any government would go to the efforts shown throughout the firefly series to simply reclaim an assassin, I don't care how special that assassin is! However, perhaps they would for something else, something much more dangerous (muwhahaha obvious foreshadowing!)..... I should also warn everyone that I depict the Academy as being a pretty brutal place and it may seem a tad disturbing to some. If you have any questions or advice leave in the comment section- as I guarantee you that I will read them

Disclaimer: I by all means necessary am clearly rolling in dough because of this Fan Fiction- as a matter of fact I am earning so much from it that I intend to buy the rights to Firefly off of Fox just so that I will never have to type this again. No but on a more serious note I do not own nor do I intend to reap monetary reward from the use of any characters/objects/other copyrighted stuff displayed within the Firefly series!

Everyone who attended the Academy was intelligent, some more than others, and several who were so intelligent that the possessed unique abilities. There are 3 individuals of whom I reference with the latest description, they are called readers or witches by society- they are Telepaths.

These 3 Telepaths are spread over the Acade

Comments
Saturday, 25 February 2012 05:51
Ok I spaced out the paragraphs and added some new info- I also changed the font to arial to make it easier to read. Wish me luck with my writing guys- because I aim to misbehave.
Saturday, 25 February 2012 19:59
I think this is an improvement. The flow is better, and dividing this background information into kind of a prologue allows you to more quickly move to the main plot.
Saturday, 25 February 2012 20:20
Great improvement, penquin11. I really like how you brought us up to speed on how the Academy came to be as it now is and in particular how certain parties made sure Blue Sun would be at the heart of everything. Chilling stuff. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Tuesday, 28 February 2012 13:51
Much more readable with the division into paragraphs. Good work improving your writing. It doesn't surprise me that Blue Sun and the Government connived at setting up a situation that they thought would "streamline" the system for getting their way, and that once the system was set up in an imbalanced fashion, it was susceptible to abuse. Good set-up for the context of your tale.
Wednesday, 28 March 2012 19:04
Added a table of contents section which I will update as the fan fiction progresses!

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