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Family (Part 7/14)

Thursday, February 2, 2012

Girls' night out for warrior women. And Kaylee and Simon discover why Paquin sweethearts don't go on romantic moonlight strolls.

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The captain was not at all surprised by her findings, and Zoë hadn't expected him to be. "Corruption runs deep in this town," he stated after she'd reported back to him in Serenity's cargo bay that afternoon.

"That it does," she agreed. "There's a killer on the loose here, and he's protected by the locals. Not 'cause they like 'im, but 'cause they're scared of 'im."

"I hate that!" he muttered. "I hate how the rich and powerful always get away."

Zoë studied him closely. She could see that even though there was a look of resignation on his face, he was still hard at work trying to come up with a solution. Planning, plotting, scheming…

She had to stop him.

"Sir," she said. "You promised Jayne you'd stay out of it. Perhaps we should honor that promise?"

He looked at her, his eyebrows contracted in a frown. "You think so?"

"What else can we do? We try and do anything we'll only bring a whole lotta trouble down on us and the Cobbs. You don't mess with this guy."

"Haven't even met 'im," Mal mumbled. "Haven't seen 'im, sized 'im up. But I guess I don't have to. You're right, we can't do nothin'." He sighed heavily, showing how much it bothered him to come to this conclusion. "We'll stick around for a few more days," he decided. "Try and keep Jayne outta trouble."

She nodded. "You reckon he'll do somethin' stupid?"

"It's Jayne," he said, and it answered her question perfectly. He gave her a stern look. "Don't tell 'im," he warned her. "Don't tell 'im this man killed his father."

"I won't," she promised. "But I think he knows."

Mal sighed again. "Most like. All the better reason to keep an extra eye on 'im."

Zoë felt a smile tug at the corners of h

Comments
Thursday, 02 February 2012 19:52
I'd been getting kind of a vibe that direction from Jo. The hunt was fun, and something tells me the wild dogs are going to be plot significant.

Mal doesn't stop scheming just because someone tells him to...
Friday, 03 February 2012 04:28
Yeah, Mal, you're not fooling me. You can't resist trying to right wrongs and help those in need, particularly kind maternal folk like Radiant that remind you some of your own ma.
Will Jayne do something, stupid or otherwise, about this situation with his family? Well, it's Jayne.
I particularly liked how the dialog between Zoe and Jo had a little bit of everything: character illustration, backstory, plot building, seamlessly integrated without being obtrusive.
The scene with Kaylee, Simon, Jayne and the wild dogs was menacing without being over-the-top.
Good chapter!
Friday, 03 February 2012 23:14
Lucky Jo had Zoe with her or that mean old dog would have had her and I can't believe Jayne missed the wild dog he was aiming at when he told Simon and Kaylee to run! Hope the next chapter comes along soon, Ali D :~)
"You cn't take the sky from me!"
BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER
Friday, 23 November 2012 23:49
Wow...a dingo as big as a bear?! That is a screw-up in the cloning process, alright! Damn...

;P

And I can totally see McHaig using captured wild dogs to either attack the Cobb home - one just showing up when Kaylee and Simon were outside seems suspicious - or for something else nefarious.

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