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Family (Part 5/14)

Monday, January 16, 2012

New friendships are in the making, and brother and sister try to catch up.

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So at least one of Radiant Cobb’s children had inherited her looks.

That’s what flashed through Zoë’s mind when she first saw Jude, or Judith as her full name was. At around thirty years old, she was small and slender, and with a certain shyness about her that made her look even smaller. She arrived at the house with her husband, a decent looking kind of man who introduced himself as Fergus Campbell, and their two kids, a five-year-old boy and a baby girl, and she threw herself at Jayne, planting a kiss on his cheek, with such affection that only an adoring baby sister could show. Jayne responded by hugging her with the same tenderness he’d shown his mother.

He was a little standoffish towards the rest of the little family, though. He politely shook the hand of his brother-in-law, but didn’t look him in the eye, and he glared at the children as if they were little bombs that could blow up in his face at any time. The feeling was mutual, at least with the older one, whose name was Finnegan. He stared at his ‘uncle Jayne’ with undisguised suspicion and then ran to his grandmother for protection. Wise kid.

Radiant had insisted that the crew of Serenity should stay for supper, and so they were all together fifteen people crammed into the tiny living room that night, too many to be seated around one table, but they had somehow managed to find sufficient room for everybody. Mattie, for instance, stayed in his chair by the fireplace, eating off a tray in his lap, and River apparently had decided she should stay on the footstool next to him, or at least Simon hadn’t been able to get her to sit anywhere else.

There was definitely no shortage of food; Radiant had managed to produce an impressively massive feast in that little kitchen of hers, mostly potatoes and some sort of meat. Jayne was eating like he hadn’t had a decent meal in years, and come to think of it he probably hadn’t; the awkwardness of suddenly being home certainly hadn’t ruined his appetite. It made Zoë smile a little, and when she n

Comments
Monday, 16 January 2012 18:25
Sad. No matter which of them left, one of them would have been miserable having to stay behind.
Tuesday, 17 January 2012 14:52
I really like Jo, and it was good for Jayne to have the fact rammed home that you NEVER trust the Alliance. I like how the crew are all trying to find ways to help and hope Simon can do something for Mattie. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Tuesday, 17 January 2012 18:53
I liked how you showed the interaction of Jayne with his two sisters, and how different it was for the two of them. How with the baby sister it was all affection and not so much of substance, and how with the older sister, they found common ground in the gift of a gun. I love the details you've included -- such as Jayne eating like he hadn’t had a decent meal in years, and even Mal having a big appetite; Simon's reaction to being informed that he was eating wild dog; Zoe saying that the hunting sounded like fun. I hope Simon
Tuesday, 17 January 2012 18:54
...is able to help Mattie. (I don't know why that got cut off!)
Tuesday, 17 January 2012 19:17
Thanks for your comments, guys :)

Yes, Byte, it's sad. There's always one sibling who gets labeled 'the responsible one', and once you have that label, you're stuck with it. Jo is different than Jayne, more down to earth and probably smarter, but she too has that wild side she sometimes wishes she had the chance to explore.

Amdobell, glad you like Jo. I'm quite fond of her myself ;) Simon would probably say she's a female version of Jayne, but (I hope) there's a lot more to her than that.

eb, the interaction between adult siblings have always fascinated me for some reason. I feel Jayne views Jo as 'one of the guys' and doesn't really know how to relate to the 'girlie' side of her, the side that talks about feelings and stuff.
BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER
Friday, 23 November 2012 23:00
I know all too well what it's like to be given the title of "responsible" child, the one expected to take over when things go pear-shaped and a steady hand's needed to support the parents. I'm basically doing everything these days due to my dad being in the hospital with a broken hip and a suppurating knee after a recent joint replacement...gets to be tiring after awhile :S

But still, I have to chime in and say you write the Cobb children so perfectly! All 4 children are separate characters and have their issues but still love their mother and each other :D

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