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Indigo - Part XXIV

Monday, January 2, 2012

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal has something like a plan forming in his head, and the crew is getting closer to some action. NEW CHAPTER

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Indigo was the last at breakfast, having stopped off in the infirmary to check on Sara first. He spent a few minutes chatting to Hank as well, marvelling at the laid back attitude the man had, especially considering his recent very close brush with death, but he realised there was no point in being surprised all the time at this crew. Jayne, a married family man, the number of kids on board, a captain willing to take him and Sara someplace safe ... if he let himself be amazed all the time he’d go around with his chin to his knees.

By the time he arrived in the warm kitchen the rest of the adults were already seated around the large table, bowls of what looked like oatmeal in front of each of them.

“There’s enough in the pan,” Kaylee said. “And sweetener if you want. Or salt, if that’s how you like it.”

“Thank you, ma’am.”

Kaylee laughed. “Don’t you go calling me that. Makes me feel like I'm about a hundred.”

“Can’t think you’re old enough to be married, let alone have a couple or three kids.” He smiled.

The mechanic pinked up. “I think you’re a bad man, Indigo MacCready.”

“Wouldn’t be at all surprised.” Indigo picked up the bowl that sat ready and spooned oatmeal into it.

Jayne growled slightly, only stopping when River put her hand on his.

“Should I be worried?” Simon asked in a low whisper.

Kaylee blushed ever deeper. “Nope. Course not. But his voice ...”

“His voice?”

She glanced at the other women around the table, seeing understanding in their eyes. “It’s ... like he’s had too many cigarettes, or cigars, or something, you know? Only it’s been oiled, like when I do the compression bearings. A bit like ... I don’t know, it rolls through a person, you know?”

“Not ... really.” Simon looked up at Mal, who shrugged, never having noticed it himself.

“Oiled,” Zoe said quietly. “Sounds about it.”

She’s right , Freya murmured in Mal’s mind. It’s quite ... hypnotic.

You planning on leaving me for an old gunhand? he asked, his mental tone amuse

Comments
Monday, 02 January 2012 15:19
As usual, yay for more Indigo!

Quite nice getting a few of these to read close together. This is heating up nicely, poor slavers...

Sorry I missed that christmas fic, busy week and all. Its really good, and funny. I love your Jayne hijinks.

How do u get the voices so right? There are other very good fics around, but none of them have me seeing the scene like yours does. I read these and I swear I can hear the actors delivering these lines.
DUNLUDJIN
Tuesday, 03 January 2012 00:13
I agree with the BlueHandedMenace; I can just see Mal, River and even Freya in my minds eye.

Thanks for more Indigo. This is definitely one of my favorite stories.
Tuesday, 03 January 2012 05:17
Setting up for the big action. I like how you've leavened it with humor. “And a man doesn’t keep secrets from his wife?” “Not if he wants to stay married, no.”--liked this exchange. "Jayne thumped him on the back hard enough to dislodge any obstruction, including ribs and teeth"--funny! I can just see it. Also liked River calling Simon "boob" in her mind.
Tuesday, 03 January 2012 17:16
Loved this! Very glad that a plan is slowly coming together. Just as happy that no one is totally trusting Indigo, I don't trust him to do anything but look out for his ownself and his daughter, no matter how much he might owe Mal and the crew. And I always love any Maya goodness you drop in even if it is pretty miniscule.
Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Tuesday, 03 January 2012 22:22
And now that the plan is laid out in entirety, nothing can possibly go wrong.

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