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Eagle (Part 2/7)

Friday, December 30, 2011

Jayne runs into someone from his past. That usually means trouble.

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"And what makes you so gorram sure I'd choose you?"

Jayne Cobb blamed the words. Not that he believed them. There was no rutting way Mal would choose the pompous doctor over him. It had been the stress, the frustration talking.

And still the words had left just a big enough piece of doubt in his mind to make him ponder them most of the day. After all, he did recall a certain time spent in an airlock. And it was enough to make him think too much. To cloud his judgment. To let his guard down. To forget paying attention to his surroundings.

And he was in a place where you most certainly should have your wits about you. He sat at the counter at the local bar (another costumer had given up his seat after he'd glowered at him), spending the last of his money on watered-down drinks, and tried to shed that feeling of uneasiness.

Then someone put a gun to his back.

He blamed the words. It shouldn't have been so easy to overpower him.

His instincts told him to fight back, to draw his own gun, but apparently his instincts were a little slow today and so he managed to quell the urge to do what would have been suicide. Instead he glanced sideways at the person holding the gun, who at that same moment sat down in the chair next to his.

"I suggest you let Hui take your weapon," the man said, nodding towards someone Jayne could not see, but sensed moving around behind him, and the next moment a hand removed his gun from its holster.

Ta ma de. He really blamed the words.

He looked over his shoulder and watched the man who had just disarmed him retreat to the corner of the room, joining another guy already sitting there.

"Hey, Jayne," the man in the chair next to him said. "Remember me?"

Jayne turned back towards him, scowling.

"Rufus Miller," he replied. "I see you're still one ugly summabitch."

He'd recognized the man straight away. Hadn't expected to see him here, though. But then again, people from his pas

Comments
Friday, 30 December 2011 16:02
Oooh, so glad Jayne wasn't really leaving and I liked how that emblem ties in with the crew he used to work for. Mal will figure it out just hopw he doesn't take too gorram long. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Thursday, 05 January 2012 14:59
I liked seeing things from Jayne's perspective. And as usual, you're good at mining Jayne's perspective for humor. I liked this line: "His instincts told him to fight back, to draw his own gun, but apparently his instincts were a little slow today." Jayne already recognizes his predicament has mostly to do with his own actions and reactions. He's actually (dare I say it) a *responsible* guy, and accepts responsibility for himself. He's not blaming anyone else, although he is willing to blame bad luck a bit.
"Rufus gave him an hour, which was a lot more than Jayne would have given him." -- ever practical, Jayne would think this, even as he's enacting his diversion plan. "How could it be that all the men he had worked with had this habit of yapping and yapping before they shot anyone? Everybody knew it was better to do it the other way around." -- again, so practical. Love this focus on Jayne. You've given us a great view of the character, MarKomi, Eager to read more.
BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER
Wednesday, 21 November 2012 17:35
Oh ho! Jayne got ambushed but managed to screw them over in the end...awesome!! Definitely loved this look at Jayne's ever-practical view of his life and affairs, especially his laments on how his bosses tend to like the super-villain rant a bit too much, even Mal I suspect!

;P

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