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Firefly: Family - Introduction

Sunday, November 6, 2011

Serenity looks for work while the Core Worlds feel the effects of Miranda.

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- Introduction -

Lord, I am walking your way.

Let me in, for my feet are sore, my clothes are ragged.

Look in my eyes, Lord, and my sins will play out on them as on a screen.

Read them all.

Forgive what you can, and send me on my path.

I will walk on, until you bid me rest.

As she sat staring at the cortex screen River Tam could hear the Sheppard in her head reciting that pray. Right now she imagined it was for the people that were being hurt or killed in the core…because of them…because of Miranda.

The wave had been seen by billions of people. It started a fire, which only smoldered at first. People were shocked at what they heard and turned to the government for answers. The Alliance government denied the event, called it a hoax. This worked, for a time.

Then the family and friends of the hundreds of young men and women that were lost over Mr. Universe’s moon started to ask questions. Each of them had gotten a different story regarding some accident that took their loved one's life. Putting those stories together, none of it made sense. So more questions were asked, more stories were told. The fire grew hotter.

A partial transmission picked up by a freighter was released. It sounded like a battle involving many of the ships that were said to have had accidents. It also mentioned Reavers. The government tried to erase it but no matter how many Cortex sites they took down it seemed two more would popup.

Finally the smoldering fire got air and as fires do, it erupted into a blaze. A young member of Parliament had started to demand answers. He was what you would call an honest man. He wanted to know the truth about Miranda and he wanted to know what Blue Sun’s role had been if any. Two days later he was killed when his hover cars mysteriously crashed and caught fire. Protest broke out. There were too many questions, to many things that did not mak

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Sunday, 06 November 2011 18:28
Well here is the Intro...hope you all like it.

I also did a rewrite of my first story. Each part has been updated. If anyone would like to go back a re-read them and leave comments I would appreciate it.
Sunday, 06 November 2011 20:41
You start off with a bang, m52. Ominous happenings in the Core...seems very likely to me that what you describe might come to pass. That Miranda broadwave wouldn't go without fallout forever. I like your idea that it's like a slow fire that builds from smouldering into a big conflagration. Loved the encounter with Badger. I like how your first chapter is full of action--really draws us in. I also liked how Inara was able to order Mal back to bed--and get him to comply, but of course he had to assert that no one orders him around on his boat. Funny! It's great to see you back here with a new story--something for me to look forward to as you post! :-)
Monday, 07 November 2011 01:41
Thank you edfiddler!
Tuesday, 08 November 2011 05:49
Well, the movie kinda said the 'verse rolled over and went back to sleep, but I'm willing to hear more.

I do like your take on Persephone, rather similar to what I figured with even the upper crust like Harrow and Atherton having some small involvement in crime on the side. And I also like seeing Badger get his comeuppance.
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Thursday, 10 November 2011 04:21
So I've read this and the entire work preceding it. I must say I'm quite impressed. Looking forward to more.
Saturday, 12 November 2011 19:03
looking foward to more thx keeep it uopp:) :P
Monday, 21 November 2011 06:25
Nice story but there was a number of spelling and or grammar errors. Not to be mean just offering friendly feedback.
Monday, 21 November 2011 20:11
Nutluck, if you do see errors please send me a message pointing them out, I would like to correct them. I appreciate the help.

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