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Indigo - Part XX

Sunday, October 16, 2011

Maya. Post-BDM. The crew question Indigo, but just can they trust him? Finally, a NEW CHAPTER! (So sorry, and I promise not to leave it this long again!)

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“My Jayne is angry.” River lifted the shuttle smoothly into the air, heading out over the hills away from town to take a wide detour, but she still glanced over her shoulder at her husband.

The big man, leaning against the wall watching Indigo as he lounged on the bench along the bulkhead, grunted. “No.”

“Jayne.”

He sighed heavily. “Yeah, well, maybe I am.”

“He isn’t who you thought he was.”

“Well, he ain’t dead for a start.”

“Would you prefer he was?”

Jayne looked down at the Sharps rifle still nestled in his arms. “Might be easier. I’d gotten myself all ready for making the man who killed him pay, and it turns out that hole in the churchyard is empty.”

“Do you want to put him in it?”

“No,” Jayne grudgingly admitted. “And I’m kinda glad he’s still alive, too.” He peered at her. “Does that make me sound crazy?”

“Jayne, you’re forgetting who you’re talking to. The wind is southerly, and I know a hawk from a handsaw, but that isn’t always the case.”

He sighed. “Moonbrain, if it’s one o’ them days, maybe I should be flying.”

“I won’t crash us. At least, not on purpose.” She flashed him a bright smile.

“You’re winding me up.”

“Just a little.” She could feel Indigo behind her, listening in to their conversation, even though he had his eyes closed pretending he was dozing. “There’s more to this than meets the eye.”

“Yeah, I reckon you’re right.” Jayne chuckled deep in his chest. “And to tell the truth, I might not have to worry too long ‘bout Indigo’s rising from the grave, not once Zoe knows he’s coming.”

“She does,” River said, curving the shuttle’s flight around so that they came up on Serenity at the right angle.

“Then stand back and wait for the fireworks,” Jayne commented as his wife touched the small vehicle down on the extender arm and cut the engine.

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Mal got to the shuttle door at the same moment as Zoe.

“No,” he said firmly, putting his arm out to stop her.

She gazed at him, her beautiful face apparently without expression, alth

Comments
Sunday, 16 October 2011 21:28
Glad to hear more form this story - don't know who to believe right now but I'm sure it will be interesting.
Sunday, 16 October 2011 23:44
Alright, I'll come right out and admit it: I haven't read any of the previous chapters of this, so I'm a little lost. I have read some of your other fics, though, so I think I have your basic scenario understood. Nonetheless, I found this intriguing. I'm wondering whether Indigo can be trusted. I'm inclined to give him less benefit of the doubt than Jayne does, but maybe more than Zoe. I really enjoyed the section in which Mal recollects the advice of his old sergeant, particularly the line about Auntie Ethel's seventeen layer cake, It seems to me the Mal has yet to fully follow that advice. I'm not sure I'd let Indigo stay without a lock on his door--seems more trusting than I'd expect Mal to be. Now I'll shut my mouth and go read this story from the beginning! :-)
Sunday, 16 October 2011 23:46
I really don't trust Indigo and not sure I like him either. He may be an old friend of Jayne's but he is as far from trustworthy as it is possible to get. I'd hand him over to the sheriff and count myself well rid of him just hope he doesn't do anything bad while he is on Serenity. Plus, with not locking him in I would have set Jayne as gaoler. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Monday, 17 October 2011 19:46
? I remember posting to this. That's odd.

But perhaps good, as I posted some spec about just who Indigo is protecting and the beginning chapters of the story, and I should try to avoid speculating.

I'll be interested to find out if I'm right though.

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