HANDFUL OF STARS: 47. "The Face In The Mirror"
Friday, October 7, 2011
"Marcus finds out you cannot escape fate and just as Shepherd Book finds a reason to be happy the other shoe drops."
CATEGORY: FICTION
TIMES READ: 3797
RATING: 9.0 (G)
SERIES: FIREFLY
TITLE: "THE FACE IN THE MIRROR"
CHAPTER: 47. Sequel to "NEVER LET GO"
SERIES: HANDFUL OF STARS Series
AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL
FANDOM: "FIREFLY"
PAIRING: Simon/Kaylee Mal/Inara
RATING: PG-13
SUMMARY: "Marcus finds out you cannot escape fate
and just as Shepherd Book finds a reason to be happy
the other shoe drops."
The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'
are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant
Enemy. No infringement of copyright is intended.
"THE FACE IN THE MIRROR"
A "Firefly" Story
Written by Alison M. DOBELL
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He knew he was being followed but it did not matter. He could come and go as and when he wished. Right now what he needed was a little intel and the risk of being seen was worth it to use his own eyes to get the lay of the land. It was something of a dispiriting place with people locked in occupations they hated or despised. Lacklustre couples, grey lives, and yet they thought it living. He would have laughed except the humour of it all escaped him. Having seen all he needed, his exit was as rapid from view as his entry had been. Much as he would have liked to linger and watch the Sheriff's reaction such diversions were childish and he did not have the time nor the patience to pander to such whims.
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Doc Greenway was smiling, his long lanky frame hanging out of the armchair as if someone had plonked him down and let the limbs spill over the sides. He could hear the banter of the card game from the little rest area, the borrowed book making him smile again. It was poetry of a sorts but the kind written by someone with lots of life experience and not much learning. It by turns amused and touched him. Rough, ready, honest and true. If a man's life amounted to such a cipher it would make a worthy epitaph.
"What'cha readin'?"
Elias was startled by a grease marked face peering at him with open curiosity. He did not thi
Saturday, 08 October 2011 01:12
No, Book!!! NO!!! It's a trap....A TRAP!!!!!
intriguing and captivating as ever, AliD
Saturday, 08 October 2011 03:03
Excellent, excellent chapter here, Ali D. Where to start? You just covered so many different bases here. Dr Greenway's poetry book had me laughing out loud. River's cryptic warning to Book...and the final scene with the encounter...very tense. Following up on Sheriff Bourne trailing the mysterious man and his discovery of what happened to poor Marcus. Caleb's conference with Mal and Zoe and finding out about his underground connection. So many nice in-character touches like Monty hauling Mal a foot off the ground and Jayne wanting to bring the extra grenades. Loved the tender moment between Mal and Inara--and how you could write a tender moment and still include sentences like: "Inara had to bite back a string of expletives. If the Captain wasn't still recovering from recent surgery she would pick up something heavy and hit him" (!!) and have it still come out sounding beautifully tender. Absolutely brilliant, there. Loved Simon's line "he was going to die but with Kaylee it would feel like being re-born." Ali D, every scene in this was one where I didn't figure the next could possibly be more interesting and arresting, and yet you did it, topping each one, one after another, until the final scene with Book. I want to use just as many exclamation points as MalsDoxy did.
Saturday, 08 October 2011 05:54
Very cool though curious where River is right now. Wondering if she really stayed on Serenity.
Saturday, 08 October 2011 14:22
Thanks for the shiny feedback everyone. Yes, Book has found himself in a very creepy place MalsDoxy! (That exclamation mark was just for you). The poetry book isn't exactly Doc Greenway's, he picked it up on Serenity. Give you a few guesses who it belongs to. And poor Marcus, there was no real way he could ever walk out of that situation alive but he had served his purpose. Glad you liked the scenes with Monty and Jayne, and Inara's pendulum of feelings for Mal I think they make the tender moments that bit more poignant. It would also be just like Kaylee to finish Simon off with some good hearty sex - LOL. So glad you enjoyed it all. As for where River is right now, Nutluck, you will be finding out soon. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Sunday, 09 October 2011 01:20
Poem good.
Very vivid imagery discovering Marcus. I guess the people who grabbed him are good at reading the crews reactions and suspicion.
They asked the crew to come but don't expect them but the guy doesn't think Marcus' failure matters. Mal, I don't think this is going to go well.
especially them talking Book again, and thinking he's not acting like himself. Good way to put Brooks right back in there.
Sunday, 09 October 2011 15:54
Hello Bytemite, glad you like the poem and the imagery regarding poor Marcus. You'll find out more about what happens to Book in the next chapter. Thanks for the shiny comments, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Monday, 10 October 2011 20:06
Poetry book ... Jayne. No, I don't think I've ever heard those two words together before in the same sentence.
And Mal collects troubles like a dog collects fleas, eh? Can't agree more!
Excellent work! Can't wait for more!
Monday, 10 October 2011 20:06
THREE words, not two. Damn, can't count today!
Monday, 10 October 2011 23:59
No, the poetry book is not Jayne's. So happy you are enjoying the story and thanks for the feedback Jane0904, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
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