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HANDFUL OF STARS: 45. "Too Close For Comfort"

Thursday, September 22, 2011

"With the Captain finally on the mend everything is beginning to return to what passes for normal."

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TITLE: "TOO CLOSE FOR COMFORT"

CHAPTER: 45. Sequel to "THE GOOD, THE BAD AND THE CRIMINALLY INSANE"

SERIES: HANDFUL OF STARS Series

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Simon/Kaylee Mal/Inara

RATING: PG-13

SUMMARY: "With the Captain finally on the mend

everything is beginning to return to what passes for normal."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant

Enemy. No infringement of copyright is intended.

"TOO CLOSE FOR COMFORT"

A "Firefly" Story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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It was kind'a wierd how his world had gone all gorram echo-y, like he was in some metal box buried deep. The dark was oddly comforting, it being something he had experienced too many times to not find familiar but it was the sounds that were unsettling. That and the occasional spikes of pain rousing him from that quiet dark place that had been cradling him. Was he dead? If so how come there were no glowy folk or that big ruttin' fire waitin' for him? Shouldn't his mama be there to meet him? Again with the oddly warped noise and a sharp sudden intrusion of pain. If his eyes had been open he would'a closed them. 'Course, in the dark could be they already were, he had no way of knowing.

A tide of weariness carried him on its' ebb and flow and seconds later he knew no more.

Above the operating table Simon Tam worked with great care, his evident skill enabling him to cut no deeper or wider than absolutely necessary. River stood close by, handing him his surgical instruments seconds before he could ask for them. It was automatic, intuitive and creepy as hell for Jayne watching bug-eyed from the corner. Gorramit, Mal looked more dead than alive. Thought Simon was supposed to fix him? But he didn't utter a word, nor did he take his eyes off the activity, as if to look aside was to let that fragile life slip away even though Simon ha

Comments
Thursday, 22 September 2011 18:04
Very nice, now if only people would stop sticking things in Mal's head.
Thursday, 22 September 2011 19:02
Don't worry Nutluck all the painful stuff is over for our dear Captain. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Thursday, 22 September 2011 19:36
*squint* Are you being tricky? Because the crew wondering if there was nanotech still, and wondering where those filaments came from, and now Mal SMILING has me thinking this isn't over yet.

Maybe things aren't going to be painful for Mal, but something tells me there might still be some pain in store for the crew.
Thursday, 22 September 2011 20:47
Lovely chapter, Ali D! I loved the scene with Mal and Inara. I think that, like Jayne, I'd find the captain's good mood and smiles a bit disconcerting...but maybe that's just his natural state, that no one gets too see because he's had those gorram headaches for so long. And clearly the Operative is up to something...I expect we'll find out more about that soon. Shiny.
Thursday, 22 September 2011 23:19
Nice work AliD! Always nice to see Mal getting a breather before the "thrilling heroics: kick in............
Keep flyin',

K

Friday, 23 September 2011 00:19
'back and fixed' but i'm thinking about to be put to the test!! intriguing as ever, post soon, please, AliD
Friday, 23 September 2011 14:45
Me, tricky, Bytemite? What can you mean? Mal is feeling happy and very relieved to be out of pain but the story isn't quite done yet. I love messing with Jayne's head ebfiddler and the Operative is definitely up to something. Yes, Mal deserves this breather kenan82. He and the crew are going to need their wits about them soon, MalsDoxy, but not so much in a way you might expect. Thanks for all the shiny comments! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Friday, 23 September 2011 18:39
Damn it I read some of this....now I'm going to have to gao back and read the story from the begining. It is to good not to.
Saturday, 24 September 2011 14:34
Glad you are enjoying the story m52nickerson and hope you enjoy the rest of it when you go back to the beginning. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Sunday, 25 September 2011 16:05
Lovely chapter - just the right amount of happiness with a hint of foreboding! The only thing I wasn't sure about was Kaylee's not understanding the magnet - she's intelligent, capable, and the ship's mechanic ... but maybe it was simply the stress of everything. I love the mental image of the sword itching across the Operative's back - almost as if it is a living thing on its own accord.

You say there's still more to come ... great!
Monday, 26 September 2011 15:54
Hello Jane0904, thanks for the compliment. It was not a slight on Kaylee's intelligence just that she did not grasp why they would need a magnet when operating on the Captain. It would have made sense once she thought a bit more about it. As for the Operative, more to come from him. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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