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Firefly: After Miranda Part 9

Monday, September 19, 2011

The crew's plan to rescue the orphans goes as well as you would expect, which of course is bad for them.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3660    RATING: 10.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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- 9 -

Zoe and Kaylee moved alone the wall of the orphanage towards its front door under the blanket of graying clouds. Zoe picked the lock as she had done before and slowly opened the door.

“Okay, Kaylee,” she called after a quick look around.

The mechanic entered shacking off chill in the air, “We should have brought an umbrella, feels like rain.”

Zoe poked her head back out the door, “Let’s just get the box and go before it starts.”

The plan was to just get the control box and get back to Serenity. There the crew could go through the video and see if they found any evidence of abuse they could show the town. At least that was the plan…

Kaylee climbed up on the small table to the right of the door and pulled back the ceiling panel. Quickly she disconnected the wires running into the control box. As she brought it out of the ceiling she gasped.

“Zoe!” she called with fright in her voice.

Zoe quickly turned around and saw Kaylee with her hands up, still standing on the table holding the box. Glancing down the hall way she could see the business end of an Alliance issued assault rifle, the person carrying it was obscured by the stairway.

“You’re going to put that Mare’s Leg of yours down real slow like, Corporal Alleyne,” a deep voice ordered from the hall way, “don’t want to kill anyone unless I have to.”

Zoe slowly put her weapon on the ground, “it’s Washburne now, I married.”

“Excuse my mistake, Corporal; now slide that weapon over this way, dong-ma?”

Zoe slid her rifle passed the stairs and into the hallway, “What now?”

A very large man emerged from behind the stairs; he was wearing dark clothing, fit for combat. His face was scarred and Zoe thought she saw a hint of a tattoo on his left forearm.

“You must be Billy,” she said.

“Yup, now you two are going to take a walk with me down to the Sheriff’s office,” he then looked at Kaylee, “and you are going to leave that box right there on that table as you get down. We wouldn’t want you fiddlin’ with evidence.”

“Jen da

Comments
Monday, 19 September 2011 16:49
Well, at least Billy came around.
Thursday, 22 September 2011 01:51
No other comments from anyone, come on!

Good, bad or other, let me know.
Thursday, 22 September 2011 19:37
I'm not sure why there aren't any other responses, maybe it's just a slow month. It happens sometimes. Apparently a number of us go to school or teach.
Friday, 23 September 2011 17:45
m52, sorry I couldn't comment earlier, I've been away for work. I'm glad Kaylee and Zoe were able to get the projector set up and show the townspeople what was going on in the orphanage. Too Mal and Jayne got beat up in the process. Hope they're going to be alright. And I hope Preacher Evans gets what he deserves. Thanks for continuing your story. I'm looking forward to your next posting!
Friday, 23 September 2011 18:36
You don't have to apologize, life happens. I just wondered where everyone that normally feeds my ego had gone. ;)
Friday, 23 September 2011 20:27
I know how important that feedback is! There's nothing like posting a story and not hearing from anyone to make you :-( But on the other hand, when the comments do come in, it's :-) Comments make you feel like writing more.
Saturday, 24 September 2011 00:31
Comments are much like word-crack!
Sunday, 06 November 2011 18:15
Update 11-06-2011

Corrections and a bit of a rewrite.

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