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Firefly: After Miranda Part 7

Saturday, September 3, 2011

Zoe, Jayne and their new friend arrive back at Serenity. Mal is inspired by an old friend.

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Mal raced down the stairs, with Inara close behind, and hit the controls to open Serenity’s cargo door. A few seconds later Zoe pulled the Mule into the cargo bay, passing Mal at the controls.

“Did Jayne have a kid with him?” Mal asked looking up at Inara who was still standing on the stairs, “Why does Jayne have a kid?”

Inara could only mutter, “Run-tse duh fwotzoo.”

Mal turned and headed towards the Mule, “What the hell is this?” he demanded.

As soon as Zoe’s feet hit the deck she answered, “I can explain, Sir.”

“You can explain? You were to scout it out, not get into a shoot out and steal a gorram kid,” Mal said angrily seeing the fresh bullet holes in the rear of the Mule.

“They were ruttin’ beaten’ this one with a stick!” Jayne responded, “Couldn’t just leave ‘em.”

“…and we didn’t do any shooting, Sir,” Zoe added.

Mal pinched the bridge of his nose, trying to retain some level of calm. “Yes, Jayne you could have.”

“Mal…” Inara called from the stairs.

“Sir, they were hurting him pretty bad, look at the marks on him,” Zoe protested.

“…you would’ve done the same ruttin’ thing,” Jayne continued.

The rest of Serenity’s crew entered the cargo hold after hearing the commotion.

Mal’s hand dropped from his face, “Ta ma de…what you’ll don’t get, is this makes it less likely we’ll be able to get the rest of them kids out. You know, the ones that are probably taking the same type of beatings.”

“So you just wanted us to ignore what was going on?” Zoe asked trying to hold her growing anger.

“That would have been the smart thing to do,” Mal fired back.

“Mal, they made decision in the heat of the moment, I don’t think…” Inara started.

Mal whipped his head around and cut her off, “I don’t remember asking you!”

Kaylee and Simon had moved over to Jayne’s side to inspect the small boy still clinging to the mercenary. Kaylee reached out and lightly rubbed the boys back, “It’s okay, no one is going to hurt you.”

“I’m sorry; I was beginning to think you could at lea

Comments
Saturday, 03 September 2011 23:42
Pretty cool, and a bad if understandable slip by Mal about Wash.
Sunday, 04 September 2011 01:36
An excellent chapter, m52. So many things to like about it. The scene in the cargo bay was very well done, with everyone giving Mal such a hard time about his very practical objections, and his very valid point about wanting to help all the children. And Inara tells him he's not acting human! And everybody else goading him right up until he calls for Wash. Very in character there. I loved the scene with Book--could just hear his voice (even if it's all in Mal's head). Great scene with Mal waving Patience. Can't wait to see how his plan pans out.
Sunday, 04 September 2011 02:50
I agree about the cargo bay scene, particularly the way giving an order to "Wash" causes everyone to stop for a moment. I could see that happening, Mal continuing on just as certain but a little ashamed and cowed.

And how that shame follows him down into his bunk and into sleep. That's what it means to captain, it's not easy, especially when the right thing and the practical thing are at odds.
Sunday, 04 September 2011 15:46
If you give Mal time to think and decompress, he'll make the right choice and come up with a plan.

I like how he couldn’t “look” at Inara when he was in his tyrant mode.
Sunday, 06 November 2011 18:10
Update 11-06-2011

Corrections and a bit of a rewrite.

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