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Period of Adjustment

Wednesday, August 24, 2011

I tried a little Rayne, and I tried to write it with the Romantic Comedy format in mind. Hope you like chapter one.

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Period of Adjustment

Chapter One

Jayne entered the galley with food on his mind. He stopped short, though, at the sight of River sitting at the table, absorbed in a book. She wasn’t tearing out the pages. She wasn’t “editing” the volume with tiny, crab-like scribbles which covered every blank space. She simply sat, reading. Occasionally she turned a page.

“I’m not going to levitate, if that’s what you’re watching for,” she said without looking up.

Jayne started. “I was just figurin’ what to eat, is all.”

“Usually you ingest it first and name it afterwards,” she said, still looking at the page.

“Real funny.” Truth told, being insulted made him feel a little more familiar with the situation. Ever since that sorry chain of events they all called Miranda, the whole ship had been set on its head. Nothing felt right. Jayne sighed, shook it off as usual, and turned his attention to the pantry.

“I can still kill you with my brain,” said River. Jayne looked at her; she was smiling into her book. The light dawned.

“I knew you couldn’t do that!” he said. “That’s just more crazy talk, aint it?”

Now River looked up. “I am not crazy, Jayne. That word was always insufficient. And anyway stop saying it. It’s insulting.”

“Like callin’ me a rootin’ pig?”

River paused. “Point taken. Now let me read. I take the helm in half an hour.”

Now that was part of the newness that Jayne wasn’t sure he liked, River being in charge of flying the whole ship. Sure, she was supposed to be okay now. But still. This was the girl who’d hardly said one gorram word Jayne could understand in the whole time he knew her. And this same shaky-mouthed child had leveled an entire bar in less than five minutes. So now she was flying their home around, which, incidentally, was the only thing between them all and a little thing called the Black?

He wasn’t thinking he’d like to let his guard down just yet.

River sighed and closed the book. “Can’t concentrate now,” she said.

“Well, sorry I’m sure. Last time you had a book in your hands, you threw it

Comments
Thursday, 25 August 2011 04:56
Well...gotta say you've done a lovely little first lap of the Rayne track, TrainBandit. A bit rushed, IMO, since we seem to go from 0 to angsty confusion when it comes to River's feelings, but I guess for an 18 year old getting back in the saddle of "normal" social development? That's gonna be par for the course.

Plus, I have to say I like the Mal/Inara scenes in her shuttle, and Mal throttling down all of his impulses to act all dickish. Felt real for the kind of place the crew's at right now :D
Thursday, 25 August 2011 20:50
Thanks BlueEyedBrigadier, I had fun with it.

Yes, I was shooting for conveying how someone who'd been suppressed when it came to normal development might react when she was faced with her new feelings and finally free to act on them. And like I said, the Romantic Comedy format has them fight, slowly realize their own feelings, then surrender. We'll see how I do...

I was worried that the Minara thing would be too fast, but I do have plans for it NOT to be so easy, never fear!

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