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Firefly: After Miranda Parts 1 & 2

Sunday, July 3, 2011

The crew of Serenity heads back to civilization after Miranda. Mal has a choice to make. Inara goes back to the training house.

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The wave that shocked the verse, the Miranda incident, the Reaver revelation, the broadcast that had been seen by nearly the entire verse was known by many names. To the crew of Serenity that broadcast and the events surrounding it would always simply be known as Miranda.

…..and Miranda had changed them all.

- 1 -

Captain Malcolm Reynolds lay awake staring up at the ceiling of his bunk, thinking. Thinking was something Mal had been doing a lot of since Miranda. It had been a little over two month since Serenity lifted off from the Alliance’s repair station. Just over four months since the events of Miranda itself. Mal had Serenity stay away from any real civilized place for weeks, unsure of the fallout that was certainly happening. That was until now. Mal knew that Serenity would only be a few hours away from landing at the Companion Training House, only a few hours from Inara leaving Serenity, and him again. Unless…..

Mal rolled out of bed and over to his sink. He splashed some water over his face. Look up from the sink he stared at the mirror, his reflection silently stared back at him.

Finally he broke from his own gaze and dresses. Climbing out of his bunk he headed to the bridge to make sure they were on course. He almost hoped something was wrong, something that would keep Inara on the ship.

On the bridge Mal saw the now familiar sight of River sitting in the pilot’s seat. Since Wash’s death River had been quickly taking over his role as Serenity’s pilot. Simon had been telling the truth about things coming naturally to the girl. She took to flying like a duck to water. Mal knew that part of it was the love for his ship.

“Well, my li’l albatross, how we doin’?”

“We should be landing in about 4 hours, Captain.” River said without removing her gaze from the black in front of her.

Moving next to her he checked the nav sat and groaned “Always good to be on time, aint it?”

River looked at Mal, “Not for you…”, then looked back into the black, “….or for her.”

“I would ask what you

Comments
Sunday, 03 July 2011 04:00
There's only one small mistake here, and that is that the training house is not on Sihnon. The planet that the training house is on is never specified, but it's a rim world in the Blue Sun system - that's the reason in the movie that Inara is complaining about how different things are out here and how discipline is lax compared to her training at House Madrassa.
Sunday, 03 July 2011 04:23
Thanks for the heads up. I did a quick edit.
Sunday, 03 July 2011 09:29
Pretty interesting start. Some of the crew seem a little off personality wise. Not bad just a little. Like how quickly Mal and Inara made up for example, and Zoe seems less stoic than I would expect. Minor stuff, just thought I would mention it. Anyways looking forward to what you do next.
Sunday, 03 July 2011 17:25
Aw yeah...Mal's gonna get the Shovel Speech from Sheydra! That and some business opportunities...Companions don't lie, they omit negative remarks ;P
Sunday, 03 July 2011 18:06
Agree with BEB here about Mal and Sheydra.
Good start, and I'm eager to see where you take this.
Sunday, 03 July 2011 22:18
What's a Shovel Speech? Just a few little spelling/typos, the one I liked best was Sheydra at the end telling Jayne and Simon they could use the 'fright elevator' - guess it must be scary! Be interesting to see where you take this story with the novelty of Mal and Inara finally admitting their feelings for each other. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Sunday, 03 July 2011 22:22
Not scary anymore, thanks for the correction. It's hard for me to proofread my own writing and I really don't have anyone to do it for me.
Monday, 04 July 2011 03:25
I had to Google "Shovel Speech" too...I think Sheydra is more likely to ask Mal for a favor though; pay some dues in exchange for taking Inara from the Guild, could be interesting.
Sunday, 06 November 2011 17:55
Updated 11-06-2011.

Some corrections and re-writes.

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