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HANDFUL OF STARS: 28. "More Than a Shepherd"

Monday, April 25, 2011

"Unable to stop Serenity being boarded, Mal and his crew are powerless to do more than await what doom may fall upon them."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4113    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "MORE THAN A SHEPHERD"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Kaylee/Simon. Mal/Inara.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: Sequel to "SHEEP'S CLOTHING".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: None. All Firefly stories archived at Fireflyfans.net

SUMMARY: "Unable to stop Serenity being boarded, Mal

and his crew are powerless to do more than await what

doom may fall upon them."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"MORE THAN A SHEPHERD"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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There wasn't much time, in fact even as the Captain tried to scramble all his brain cells together to work out a gorram solution the tell tale sound of a ship docking with Serenity told him that if he failed to let the Inspector General board his boat the *tamade hundan* would just cut his way in. Much as he wanted to get River and Simon into hiding there was no point with Book openly willing to sell them out. He had no words for how much that twisted him up inside.

"Ain't you the poisonous one."

Not a flicker of regret showed on the Shepherd's face. In fact, Mal was beginning to doubt he was a Preacher at all. Just using one of an infinite number of guises most like. "I never promised you anything, Captain."

"*Wo zhidao* an' that's always bothered me. You're a man of a million secrets. How many of 'em are gonna do harm to me an' mine?"

They were all assembling to await the boarding party: Simon's protests loud, strident and full of panic. River's voice a calm counterpoint that felt all manner of wrong,

"At the end of the day, Captain, I'm just a man."

The Captain stared at him, sickened. How could such a well travelled, seemingly intelligent man, make such an idiotic statement? Was it meant in some

Comments
Monday, 25 April 2011 18:18
wow! very cool and well written!
Monday, 25 April 2011 18:40
Yay, thank you for the shiny comment, myownknight! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Tuesday, 26 April 2011 07:33
Very cool.
Tuesday, 26 April 2011 13:02
Awesome, and i completely agree with Jayne. They need to know what's coming or someone is gonna get hurt or worse dead. Thinking this is definitely one of your best...
Tuesday, 26 April 2011 18:48
Glad you like it nutluck. Yes, they are all definitely going to need to keep themselves sharp and on the ball, Angellemarcs. Thanks for the shiny comments! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Thursday, 28 April 2011 21:40
Eek, just realised I haven't commented!

Excellent chapter, although I hope you deal with Inara killing Harius - as in her having to reconcile doing so. And Book is still a mystery, something to be pondered on. Still, my favourite bit is Jayne's 'they can kill with their brains?' line. Brilliant!

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