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HANDFUL OF STARS: 24. "Picking Up The Pieces"

Sunday, March 20, 2011

"In the aftermath of events on Cheverell, the Captain and crew start to pick up the pieces realising pretty damn quick that not all of them fit."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4071    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "PICKING UP THE PIECES"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: None.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: Sequel to "COLLATERAL DAMAGE".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: None. All Firefly stories archived at Fireflyfans.net

SUMMARY: "In the aftermath of events on Cheverell, the

Captain and crew start to pick up the pieces realising pretty

damn quick that not all of them fit."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"PICKING UP THE PIECES"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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Monty was concerned. Mal didn't look so good and as for the Preacher, what in nine hells was going on there? Zoe looked ready to take the man apart. Him being unconscious was probably the only thing staying her hand. He had known Zoe a long time but never had he see her this *fafeng* before. Made a man shudder to see that look in her eyes and all manner of grateful he wasn't the one in her sights. Right now Jayne Cobb was trying to shield the fallen man as much as possible without making things worse. Old Man Ellis took a seat next to Serenity's Captain. They had met up in a clearing big enough for the Firefly to land and while they waited for Wash to bring her down he had a word or two he needed to get off his chest.

"You Kaylee's Cap'n?"

Despite the pain Mal cracked his eyes open enough to look Ellis in the eye. He fought to speak without throwing up. "*Qu*, but you already know that."

Ellis nodded slowly, choosing his words with care while appearing all casual-like, "Never seen a girl more in tune with workin's in my life. Has a rare gift."

The Captain said nothing. Sometimes you just had to wait a man out.

"Not sure I like the way trouble seems to follow ya around, Cap'n Reynolds." He pause

Comments
Sunday, 20 March 2011 17:57
Ain't you just a woman with a plan. I am definitely ready to read some more of this. I am not sure I want to be Book when Zoe finds him though.
Sunday, 20 March 2011 19:16
This is getting interestingly complicated. It still seems to me like Mal and the crew are in the middle of a fog, and so far there's no sign of a cleansing breeze. Book and River fronting each other off, the messenger who might or might not be Alliance, the people who saved Davy Johnson ... so many threads - I can't wait to see how you tied them all together!
Sunday, 20 March 2011 20:12
Thank you for the shiny feedback. As for Zoe catching up with Book, Angellemarcs, it is kind of like peeling a gorram onion. Always another layer. The threads are going to start coming together Jane0904 and when they do that fog will be blown clean away! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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